My gardian Angel is my best friend! - Grace (is her name)

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   sassychicposted 16 years ago

   Here is a Poem that I have written for a contest for a scholarship to a Arts Camp in Chicago!
   
   My Gardian Angel is My Best Friend!
   
   My Gardian Angel sits secretly on my shoulder
   She crosses her fingers, while my tears linger
   
   She says a prayer when life isnt fair
   My gardian angel cheers for the best and helps me beats the worst
   I love her even when things dont go the way they were rehearsed
   
   Life is a puzzle, Grace is there to turn the piece into place
   My gardian angel lifts my spirits in hard times
   She seems to always know whats on my mind!
   
   When my heart is hurting so is she
   Together Grace and I are on a misson to find pure happiness and Joy!
   Bring this to reality
   Bring peace with it!
   
   In the end we (Grace and I) hope the final tears are Joyful ones.
   
   
   
   Anyway this is a poem that I wrote and I am hoping you guys can give me feedback about it!
   This is the rough draft the final draft is only one of three I need to complete for the application for teh scholarship! Please post your ideas and comments for me to read!
   
   There are also illistrations to go with this poem. I am making a book (this is required). the book will have all three poems and pictures for each one.
   
   Thank You!
   ~Sassy!

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   jimmythejockposted 16 years ago

   Hey Sassychic great poem, wouldnt it be better if you published it as a hub?.....jimmy

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   sassychicposted 16 years ago

   What do you mean.
   Like leave it for people as a topic to comment on or what? Im confused. I just joined a matter of like a week or so agao maybe longer but Im new to this. Um yeah I dont know how or what to do. ????????????????????????????

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   jimmythejockposted 16 years ago

   Hi Sassy, Hubpages is a publishing site where you publish articles in what are called hubs, it is not a forum.
   you are signed into your account so what you do next is click on the red arrow on the home page and click on start a new hub, when you get in there you will find text capsules where you write your articles picture capsules where you can add pictures  and other capsules into which you can add other things.
   hope that helps.....jimmy

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   sassychicposted 16 years ago

   Thanks LOTS! I will try it and see If I can get it to work!
   
   SWEET!

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   jimmythejockposted 16 years ago

   good luck sassy have fun.....jimmy

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   sassychicposted 16 years ago

   THanks! It worked I was wondering what that stuff was about. Thanks for the help!

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