I'd like feedback on my Hub: Teaching Children how to save Money

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  1. Elsie Hagley profile image67
    Elsie Hagleyposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Teaching Children how to save Money. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. clivewilliams profile image85
      clivewilliamsposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You need direct pointers on how childrencan save money. Instead of what reads like a long story. Eg. Head Line (Ways Children Can Save Money)
      1. Using a Money Box
      blah blah blah blah blah
      2. Creating a bank account
      blah blah blah blah blah
      3. Don't buy un-needed items
      blah blah blah blah blah

      Alos make the hub read more attractive by breaking apart those long paragraphs.

  2. daydreams profile image97
    daydreamsposted 2 years ago

    I think you need to break it down into headings and paragraphs.

  3. Elsie Hagley profile image67
    Elsie Hagleyposted 2 years ago

    That's for your help.
    I will have another look at it.

  4. Janellegems profile image68
    Janellegemsposted 2 years ago

    I agree with the other hubbers.  You should use the callout and add a few headings and search for a youtube video on teaching children how to save money.  Make it unique.

  5. writejt profile image77
    writejtposted 2 years ago

    I suggest adding a heading/subheading 'Benefits children can get' where their involvement in counting money, looking at a catalogue and, ordering things etc to fit their budget, is highlighted.

  6. Elsie Hagley profile image67
    Elsie Hagleyposted 2 years ago

    Thanks once again for all the great suggestions, I will certainly see what I can do.

 
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