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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Teaching Children how to save Money

  1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Teaching Children how to save Money. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. clivewilliams profile image74
      clivewilliamsposted 11 months agoin reply to this

      You need direct pointers on how childrencan save money. Instead of what reads like a long story. Eg. Head Line (Ways Children Can Save Money)
      1. Using a Money Box
      blah blah blah blah blah
      2. Creating a bank account
      blah blah blah blah blah
      3. Don't buy un-needed items
      blah blah blah blah blah

      Alos make the hub read more attractive by breaking apart those long paragraphs.

  2. daydreams profile image92
    daydreamsposted 11 months ago

    I think you need to break it down into headings and paragraphs.

  3. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 11 months ago

    That's for your help.
    I will have another look at it.

  4. Janellegems profile image47
    Janellegemsposted 11 months ago

    I agree with the other hubbers.  You should use the callout and add a few headings and search for a youtube video on teaching children how to save money.  Make it unique.

  5. writejt profile image80
    writejtposted 11 months ago

    I suggest adding a heading/subheading 'Benefits children can get' where their involvement in counting money, looking at a catalogue and, ordering things etc to fit their budget, is highlighted.

  6. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 11 months ago

    Thanks once again for all the great suggestions, I will certainly see what I can do.

 
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