I'd like feedback on my Hub: China's Commercial Bike Sharing Services

  1. ehonhdouzi profile image27
    ehonhdouziposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub China's Commercial Bike Sharing Services. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image44
      Jason mackenzieposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, I observed lots of grammatical errors in your article. For example, your introductory sentence - If you are travelling or working in China.... - too long and winding with errors in tense. How about breaking it down into 2 sentences and write both correctly? Thanks, regards...