I would like feedback on my hub!!

  1. Shubhankar Sharma profile image60
    Shubhankar Sharmaposted 5 months ago
  2. Marisa Wright profile image95
    Marisa Wrightposted 5 months ago

    It's obvious from your Hub that English is not your first language.  That is a real problem on HubPages, because HubPages is aimed at English native speakers, who demand articles written in fluent, colloquial English.

    Unfortunately, your English is not up to that standard yet, and I suggest you need to spend a further year or two studying the language to improve your skills before attempting to write on a site like this. 

    There are several  basic errors in your very first sentence.

    "Now days, Smartphones are the part of our life even we can’t spend a single day without social apps..."

    should be

    "Nowadays, smartphones are part of our life.  We can't spend even a single day without social apps...

    1. Shubhankar Sharma profile image60
      Shubhankar Sharmaposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much mam!
      My article has been unpublished because I am doing editing work .I will resubmit it when it will be error free.

 
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