I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sangeet Shikhharthee Sammilan-A School of Music

  1. SSS1942 profile image82
    SSS1942posted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. I have edited a lot but can't succeed to p[ass the QAP. Will you please give strong feedback on my Hub Sangeet Shikhharthee Sammilan-A School of Music (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. jrk1121 profile image79
      jrk1121posted 3 months ago in reply to this

      The content seems good.There are some phrases that are hard to read and distract the reader (samples below).
      1.) Those times, scarcity of music schools in the comilla region suffered students a lot.
      2.) The music institution was established as per thoughts and successful experiment in classical music by Pandit Surendra Narayan Das Sangeet Ratna.

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