I'd like feedback on my Hub: Sangeet Shikhharthee Sammilan- A School of Music

  1. SSS1942 profile image80
    SSS1942posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Please note that, I made several edits in this hub but still facing difficulties to pass the QAP. Kindly let me know what is tge actual problem.

    Please give an detail feedback on my Hub Sangeet Shikhharthee Sammilan- A School of Music (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      The problem is your English sad

      "The prime motive of this music school is true spread the knowledge of Traditional music..."

      The primary function of this school is to spread knowledge of traditional music..."

      Too many names!

      Who are you writing this for? It seems to me that this article (and your other one) is aimed at Indian music students, therefore you should write it in your own language and publish it on an Indian site. It's a very focused and narrow niche topic and is unlikely to attract many viewers. If your aim is to earn money here, you need to write in topics that people are searching for.

 
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