Dear Mozart lovers I need your help

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  1. Whispering Night profile image34
    Whispering Nightposted 15 months ago

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    Dear raggededge,

    You can take rest you need. You have already given enough clue to make my article look better. I did enjoy your wise feedbacks. It was really helpful.

    Dear friends,

    I hope this article is not seen in a comical perspective but more in a serious tone. It talks about a man who faced hardship in his life and suffered a lot. Didn't  even live for long. He died at the age of Thirty-Five. Some of us will not live to see the world beyond our thirties. Okay, this story is for real Mozart fans, historians and all the musicians who are trained to play classical music. I see a lot of people paying serious attention to this subject.

    Is grammar mistake still an excuse to not feature this hub. I get friendly heads up telling me they really wish to get this article featured but still needs improvement.

    With all my respect to Mozart. I cannot change the story anymore. It's about a young girl who gets inspired after meeting the spirit of Mozart. Imagine how Mozart will sound like if you meet him in person.

    This story is dedicated to the spirit of Mozart and all the people who still care and respect him.

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      big_smile I am perfectly rested, thank you. But I get the message. You already know what my feedback is.

    2. RTalloni profile image90
      RTalloniposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Yes, grammar mistakes are a very good reason not to feature hubs.  It is painfully difficult to read anything filled with partial paragraphs and unfinished sentences, as well as other issues, so readers appreciate HubPages' editorial efforts to have writers improve ill-written articles. 

      Digging your heels in against good advice will not help you learn what you need to learn about writing in English.  You could get advice on your writing from an ESL teacher or English editor.  Also, reading a lot of English for the purpose of comparing your writing to those works could be helpful. 

      It is difficult to understand your Dear Friends letter because of the many mistakes so I may be misunderstanding you, but it sounds like your attitude is one of self-satisfaction causing you to seek approval rather than really seek helpful advice.  If that is the case, adjust your thinking so you can make use of valuable criticism.  If I am wrong, please accept my apology and understand that the way you've written the letter and your response to theraggededge led me to think this way.

  2. Whispering Night profile image34
    Whispering Nightposted 15 months ago

    Yes, I do. For the moderators who feel difficult to read this story can think of the story as a kind of conversation happened between Larry King Live and Mozart. This is a transcript of that interview.
    Every word you read, again and again, you will start turning into a pure musical person.

    Apart from this, I am curious to know whether grammar mistakes are still there. Thank you

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      No moderators read this forum. They are not hubbers like us. Neither are they HubPages staffers who sometimes help out here.

  3. Whispering Night profile image34
    Whispering Nightposted 15 months ago

    Dear raggededge,

    Thanks to you. This story is finally featured. Now I can focus on my next story.

    Yes, RTalloni lot of events happened for me to write like that and so you might get the wrong picture about me. Anyway thanks for the help. smile

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Good work! smile

  4. pen promulgates profile image55
    pen promulgatesposted 15 months ago

    Congratulations for getting it featured!

  5. NateB11 profile image94
    NateB11posted 15 months ago

    Lol

  6. Whispering Night profile image34
    Whispering Nightposted 15 months ago

    Thank you everyone.

 
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