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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Grammar is Garbage

  1. Nikhil Chopra profile image81
    Nikhil Chopraposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I would appreciate if you give your thoughts as far as correcting the grammar, but the article is a reflection of my thought, as a writer and suffices alone as far the words go,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Grammar is Garbage. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'd remove the quote marks and the italics. Let the words stand alone. I'd also delete the subtitle - it feels overly aggressive.

      I like it. Good luck.

      1. Nikhil Chopra profile image81
        Nikhil Chopraposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks a lot for taking out the time to help a fellow writer smile

        1. theraggededge profile image96
          theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

          You're welcome smile Also, I forgot to say, you need to move it to the Poetry category, otherwise it won't get approved.

          1. Nikhil Chopra profile image81
            Nikhil Chopraposted 2 months ago in reply to this

            Thank you. When it comes to the internet and protocols, I find myself to be a nine month old looking for my diapers:)

 
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