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I just finished writing my first two hubs EVER. I would love feedback!

  1. sarahspradlin profile image81
    sarahspradlinposted 2 months ago

    The first two I wrote were
    "Your Perfect Guide To Finding An Apartment" and "How To Prepare for Becoming a Foster Parent"
    Read that one that sounds more interesting or both. Any advice will help! I appreciate it so much!

    1. promisem profile image94
      promisemposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Your apartment guide has a lot of meat. I suggest putting an image at the top of it to create immediate visual interest. You might also create more paragraphs to break up the blocks of text. Otherwise, you're off to a nice start!

      1. sarahspradlin profile image81
        sarahspradlinposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you!

  2. pen promulgates profile image78
    pen promulgatesposted 2 months ago

    Hey Sarah, I read your 'finding an apartment article.' It's really very comprehensive. Fabulous. As you created a discussion forum here. Create a similar one including the link to your article under improve my article section.

    1. sarahspradlin profile image81
      sarahspradlinposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks! For some reason I thought we couldn't. I will definitely start doing that!

  3. Butterfly67 profile image86
    Butterfly67posted 2 months ago

    I read (quickly!) the foster parent article which looks really comprehensive and informative too but I think there are some big chunks of text that need breaking up as they are a bit intimidating to the reader!

    1. sarahspradlin profile image81
      sarahspradlinposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your feedback!

  4. Marie Flint profile image93
    Marie Flintposted 2 months ago

    Great topics. Keep up the problem-solving angle, and you WILL eventually make money here!

 
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