I'd like feedback on my article: 5 BEST CITIES YOU MUST VISIT

Jump to Last Post 1-3 of 3 discussions (7 posts)
  1. bureau5 profile image62
    bureau5posted 7 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 5 BEST CITIES YOU MUST  VISIT (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    replyreport
    1. Jeremy Gill profile image77
      Jeremy Gillposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:
      1) Really review your grammar. Make sure words are capitalized properly and spelled correctly. This applies for your summary too.
      2) Put a photo closer to the top. Your article is nothing but text for awhile, which could easily turn away viewers.
      3) Change your first paragraph's Heading. "5 Best Cities That From My Experince I Suggest You Guys To Visit You Will Not Regret It" sounds like a run-on sentence.
      4) The article ends awkwardly, with no closing statements that tie everything together.

      Point number one in particular is crucial. With diligent proofreading, and a bit more tweaking, I bet this can become featured. Best of luck.

      replyreport
      1. bureau5 profile image62
        bureau5posted 7 years agoin reply to this

        thanks Jeremy Gill for your notes i will take them into consideration its my first article so far but thanks smile)

        replyreport
  2. Butterfly67 profile image81
    Butterfly67posted 7 years ago

    Adding to what Jeremy has said (I'm guessing English is your second language) and getting the grammar sorted, I would suggest changing the title to say something like "Five of the Best Cities to Visit in Europe" (or something similar) to make it a bit more specific.

    replyreport
    1. bureau5 profile image62
      bureau5posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thanks Butterfly67 for your notes i will take them into consideration. yes English is my third language

      replyreport
  3. NurseFlood profile image67
    NurseFloodposted 7 years ago

    Just a small tip: when you capitalize each letter, it is considered shouting.

    replyreport
    1. bureau5 profile image62
      bureau5posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Really appreciate your feedback.
      Thank you

      replyreport
jump to first post
 
working

This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

 Necessary
 Features
 Marketing
 Statistics

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://corp.maven.io/privacy-policy

Show Details
Necessary
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Features
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Marketing
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Statistics
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)
ClickscoThis is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy)