I would love some feedback on my newly written articles.

  1. The Lemony Life profile image79
    The Lemony Lifeposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I recently just wrote two articles and would appreciate any feedback! Thank you!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image88
      Jeremy Gillposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hey Lemony, please post links when asking for help, saves us some time. Here are some:
      https://hubpages.com/travel/5-Top-Beach … on-DC-Area
      https://hubpages.com/style/The-Dos-and- … rizzy-Hair

      Regarding the Frizzy hair, I enjoyed it, good read. Nice usage of vivid pictures and callouts. The only suggestion I have here is watch your word count; aim for at least 700, and more if possible.

      Regarding the beaches near DC, again watch word count, and captioning your pictures can help increase traffic. Maybe a poll would also offer interactivity. Superb colorful pictures though, well done there. Best of luck!

      1. The Lemony Life profile image79
        The Lemony Lifeposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much! I will definitely do this in the future!

 
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