Need your healthy criticism and feedback
Hi there,
Firstly, your title is grammatically incorrect. It should be "Introducing Gurmeet RR Singh and His Academic Followers". No need for any punctuation.
Lose *all* the links. There are way too many of them and they will prevent your article being approved. Choose one or two to keep **if they are really necessary**.
Your images should be legal-to-use and it's always a good idea to add the source.
There are many grammatical and punctuation errors; too many for me to list, but some other kinder hubber might take the trouble
Get rid of those weird screen shots. I have no idea what they are or why you've included them.
Delete those links to Amazon and instead either use an Amazon capsule or a proper in-text link.
The references to the medical qualifications of his 'followers' bear no relation to the topic of the hub. I realise you have mentioned 'academic followers' in the title, but it appears to be some kind of way of legitimizing this guy's antics.
Frankly, your article is messy and difficult to understand. You need to spend some time reading up on how to create a hub.
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Hope that helps.
- pen promulgatesposted 7 years ago
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