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   right1posted 7 years ago

   Dear Hubbers,
   
   I have just published my Hub https://hubpages.com/literature/Introdu … -followers
   
   However, it couldn't pass the quality criteria. Can you please suggest me remedial measures to make it earn recognition and quality.
   
   Thanks a lot and anxiously waiting....

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Firstly, your title is grammatically incorrect. It should be "Introducing Gurmeet RR Singh and His Academic Followers". No need for any punctuation.
      
      Lose *all* the links. There are way too many of them and they will prevent your article being approved. Choose one or two to keep **if they are really necessary**.
      
      Your images should be legal-to-use and it's always a good idea to add the source.
      
      There are many grammatical and punctuation errors; too many for me to list, but some other kinder hubber might take the trouble
      
      Get rid of those weird screen shots. I have no idea what they are or why you've included them.
      
      Delete those links to Amazon and instead either use an Amazon capsule or a proper in-text link.
      
      The references to the medical qualifications of his 'followers' bear no relation to the topic of the hub. I realise you have mentioned 'academic followers' in the title, but it appears to be some kind of way of legitimizing this guy's antics.
      
      Frankly, your article is messy and difficult to understand. You need to spend some time reading up on how to create a hub.
      
      https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips
      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
      https://hubpageshelp.com/
      
      Hope that helps.

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         right1posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks. Can you please have a look now?

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      In addition to what Raggededge noted, your article is not original.  The vast majority of things you wrote can be found elsewhere on the internet.
      
      All articles here must be original.  You cannot "spin" information you find elsewhere and then use it to create a hub.
      
      Bottom line...it's no surprise that this hub can't past muster!

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      greenmindposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Highly entertaining work. Love the 32 national sports and the fully metal album art. Lots of chuckles here!

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   pen promulgatesposted 7 years ago

   Can't access it. Get page does not exist error.

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