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Two Articles in, Feedback requested.

  1. JSonofNeill profile image61
    JSonofNeillposted 7 months ago

    If anyone here with writing experience would like to be of some help, I am looking to see if there is anything that jumps out that needs improvement in my writing. I am worried that the message I am trying to send out to readers is not being fully realized. If anyone could provide some viewpoints for my articles and the style, I'd greatly appreciate it. Let me know if anything jumps out that I should keep an eye on.



  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 months ago

    It would be helpful to include links to your articles in this forum.

    I had a brief look at the DayZ piece and was struck by how many outward links you have included in the text. Your goal is to keep people on your page not send them away somewhere else.

    Also, I'me not sure your images are legal to use. They must be Creative Commons licensed of Public Domain.

  3. JSonofNeill profile image61
    JSonofNeillposted 7 months ago

    CC? So are you saying I have to pay the companies for even using their logos in an independent piece?

    1. greenmind profile image97
      greenmindposted 7 months agoin reply to this

      I use pixabay.com, if that helps.

  4. JSonofNeill profile image61
    JSonofNeillposted 7 months ago

    Days Standalone Article

    Shadow of War Article

  5. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 7 months ago

    Your Days article is not published, you will need t use the special feedback link send when you failed QAP.  I can only see one hub on your profile.