I'd like feedback on my article: Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra...

  1. krithi13 profile image72
    krithi13posted 11 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra Weight (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? I have been assigned more score to my second article when compared to first article. Though my first article has less score than second one it is featured but my second article having more score is not passing QAP. Help me. Thanks

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 11 days ago

    There are quite a few technical problems with the language.  For example "Last longing walks" should be "long lasting walks".

    Also this is a topic that is very well covered by people with credentials and obvious expertise.