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I'd like feedback on my article: The impact of coloring pages on mental health

  1. kristoph profile image60
    kristophposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The impact of coloring pages on mental health (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. psycheskinner profile image82
      psycheskinnerposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      IMHO when you claim "modern medicine" has proved some pretty huge things, you need citations to back it up.

  2. AliciaC profile image99
    AliciaCposted 3 months ago

    I agree with psycheskinner that you need references, since you've made major claims about the health benefits of coloring. I think that proofreading your article to correct the English errors and writing the title and subtitles in title case would also be helpful.

  3. theraggededge profile image99
    theraggededgeposted 3 months ago

    You can't self-promote either, so best remove that link to the spammy-looking coloring page site,

    You may not be aware but it was coloring pages that killed Squidoo - we don't want that happening here.

    1. kristoph profile image60
      kristophposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you all for suggestions. Coloring pages killed Squidoo? How come?

 
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