I'd like feedback on my article titled "7 Popular Tourist Attractions"

  1. srirad0675 profile image90
    srirad0675posted 3 weeks ago

    Greetings!

    The article "https://hubpages.com/travel/Tourist-Attractions-Around-Mysuru" was rejected for network site. Please help improve its quality.

    Thanks and regards.

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      https://hubpages.com/travel/Tourist-Att … und-Mysuru

      I'd suggest you put at least one photo near the top of the page. One that illustrates the area well.

      You are possibly over-using the keyword 'Mysuru' in your subtitles. I would use it like that but HubPages seems to be very cautious about it.

      Your English is improving all the time. Good work.

      1. srirad0675 profile image90
        srirad0675posted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        Thank you.

 
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