I'd like feedback on my article: Pakistan as a Best Tourist Spot

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  1. Roomi899 profile image61
    Roomi899posted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Pakistan as a Best Tourist Spot (must be signed in to view)

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image41
      Miebakagh57posted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      The major issue with the article is grammar. The other is grammatical accuracy.                                                                     Too much grammatical errors spoilt the story. I believe if you can dawnload the free version of grammarly, an online grammar spelling checking tool, you will see improvements in the article. Google 'grammarly.com' to dawnload and instal the device.                                                         Second, migrate the Learning Center to learn how to improve the content of your articles. You can do this by clicking HELP on your feed. Then dig deep.                                              Like as Alicia said, a conclusion is necessary. Likewise I think you should add at least 3 references or the source of work you consulted.                                                                    One more thing. Can you make the article between 1000 to 1500 words?  Google like long article.                                 Good success.

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 5 weeks ago

    Your article contains some interesting information. Unfortunately, it also contains grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes. There should be a space after a comma and period (or full stop), but not before them. Subtitles shouldn’t be followed by colons.

    You should indicate the source of the photos to show that they have the correct license for use on HubPages. In one section, you have four photos in a row. It would be good to put these into one capsule and use the thumbnail setting in the capsule to show them.

    I think the article would benefit from a conclusion of some kind.

    1. Roomi899 profile image61
      Roomi899posted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      thanks for your opinion,actually i am new in this field,can you tell me a way to become a good writer, i hope you can help me.

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

        We can't tutor you how to write properly. That's up to you. There are lots of websites to help you with grammar and punctuation.

        Make use of the Learning Center. Click Help, top right, to navigate there.

  3. Roomi899 profile image61
    Roomi899posted 5 weeks ago

    thanks for your suggestion,can you guide me.


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