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I'd like feedback on my article: Best 150cc-400cc bikes to buy under 2 lacks in.

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    Automobile 180posted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Best 150cc-400cc bikes to buy under 2 lacks in India.. What can I do to improve? Thanks! Please someone proofread it for me

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image89
    Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks ago

    Automobile, here are my suggestions (again). You need to implement them for them to help.

    1) Capitalize key words in your title and remove the period
    2) Fix numerous awkward sentences and grammar errors. Your very first sentence demonstrates a lack of experience with English that will turn readers away: "If you are planning to buy a new bike under 2 lacks which offers the best feedback and comfortably, then here are the Best bikes to buy between 1-2 lacks in India, you must consider them before buying one."

    Another example: "Surprisingly R15 do come in this list"

    3) Edit the wording of your poll.

    If you aren't fluent in English, I strongly suggest you team with someone who is or you'll struggle to get your work featured. Good luck.

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      Automobile 180posted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Please can you tell me the correct sentences for the above.

      1. Jeremy Gill profile image89
        Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

        Seems you've already improved the sentences I suggested, which is a good step.

        Still, if you struggle that much with grammar, this really may not be the site for you because you'll struggle with each and every article, comment, and forum. My advice would be to improve your English to complete fluency, find a friend who is fluent (and willing to help), or find a website better suited to you.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    The big issue I see is the images. They must carry a Creative Commons license or be in the public domain. This link will help with image selection
    https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

    There are some problems with grammar although major ones. Random capital letters need to be changed to lower case. Some sentences have errors

    "It has most stylish looks. It offers the most fun to ride rides." A better way is: It has stylish looks. It offers the most fun to ride.

    Hope that helps.

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      Automobile 180posted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      The images are originally mine. So can I use it?

 
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