I'd like feedback on my article: Freedom and it's type.

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  1. Parwaiz Khan profile image61
    Parwaiz Khanposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Freedom and it's type. (must be signed in to view)

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image71
      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, Alicia has said that you have plagiarized. That's a point against the article.   I have the opinion HP alerted you of the issue.  But you went right ahead and publish a "copy" piece.                  Article writing is not that easy. You have to read,  research, and make brief, gistly notes.           Turn these notes into sentences-simple, complex, and compound sentences.                     More so, as you write, don't forget to quote or incorporate the original author(s) catchy phrase or sentences. Put these in double parenthesis.     Or like this: "The coronavirus pandemic," says Miebakagh Fiberesima, "has a significant global lesson.   I would advice you visit HP learning center. Click HELP on the top right hand side of your time line or page. Get all the help you need.                Thanks. Welcome to HubPages. And good success.

  2. AliciaC profile image92
    AliciaCposted 4 years ago

    The first three paragraphs of your article are the same as those on another site. In addition, some of your sentences don't make sense. You'll need to write an original article in your own words in order for your article to be featured.

  3. Parwaiz Khan profile image61
    Parwaiz Khanposted 4 years ago

    And sir tell me how I can withdraw money from my account what is the process?

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image71
      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Parwaiz, have you noted Mrs. Alicia advice and compile with my comments?                     Or were you here to write for the money?        (Long) way to earn money-start getting your article(s) feature for a while. Thanks.

    2. CYong74 profile image97
      CYong74posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You are not going to be able to earn anything if your articles are not featured. Plagiarized i.e copied articles will also never be featured. Technically, it's even widely considered a crime.

      HubPages also pays only through Paypal. In other words, if you're from Pakistan, there is little way for you to get paid.

    3. theraggededge profile image88
      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      big_smile big_smile big_smile

      What money is that?

      1. Miebakagh57 profile image71
        Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

        Bev, I beg your pardon! Aha ha ha! He he he! Singging. Ogolome ibie re fubara pakabo tarake  Okro fima tumo tengele!  Bev, I can't help it.          Have you lately notice right here in this forum how I painstakely respond to his copy cat piece?                            Yet, there's another guy, MoonDot, who had his first ever article feature on following my prompting and now wants me to be his mentor.                          So, why can't I laugh, sing and ease tension?   Have a nice time, Bev.

      2. NateB11 profile image84
        NateB11posted 4 years agoin reply to this

        lollol

    4. NateB11 profile image84
      NateB11posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Earnings go directly into your PayPal account as long as you have it activated here on this site. When your earnings reach the $50 threshold, money will be deposited into your Paypal late in the following month that it reaches this threshold. After it's in your Paypal you do what you want with it.

      If the article you wrote is copied as others have said, it disqualifies the article because no copied content is allowed on the site.

      Otherwise, the article is too short and would be rejected for being substandard. It also, as someone else pointed out, has sentences in it that are awkward and more or less do not make sense. In addition, there are misspellings and grammatical errors. I cannot tell if it's spun or badly translated, but the article overall doesn't make sense in many places.

  4. Parwaiz Khan profile image61
    Parwaiz Khanposted 4 years ago

    Those which is in my hub pages account.

    1. theraggededge profile image88
      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      There is no money in your Hubpages account.

      Check it out: https://hubpages.com/my/earnings/affiliate/

    2. Miebakagh57 profile image71
      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, you join, HP two days ago. How do you know there is "those" money in your account? Did you lodge some money at. HubPages'?

  5. Moondot1822 profile image91
    Moondot1822posted 4 years ago

    Making money is not that easy man.

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image71
      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Moondot, you get the sense to let the truth be told. When I began to earn last year under AdSense, HP is going under and Google pull out AdSense from HP.     Now, I've try to configure HubPages' ad. You're welcome.

  6. Moondot1822 profile image91
    Moondot1822posted 4 years ago

    Miebakagh, you are great. I think the song you sang is Nigerian song. You should translate it so that we can enjoy it too.

 
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