I'd like feedback on my article: Silence is not the answer

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  1. Justine Mulenga profile image60
    Justine Mulengaposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Silence is not the answer (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. peachpurple profile image79
      peachpurpleposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Add in pictures, you can get them from Pixabay, then you can add in callouts of Prayers

      1. Justine Mulenga profile image60
        Justine Mulengaposted 8 months agoin reply to this

        Thank so much

    2. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
      Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Your article is inundated with all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors. (For example, a sentence always begins with a capital letter.) Therefore, you need to read and reread this useful HP web page:

      https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips

      Good luck.

      1. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
        Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

        Here is another HP article that you should read and reread:

        https://owlcation.com/humanities/Writin … -Sentences

        1. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
          Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

          Here an example of a run-on sentence from your article:

          “It's not that Jesus didn't hear the request, he heard but his time had not come to act and obviously the woman of Canaan through her inner witness knew that she would get what she went to see Jesus for.”

          Here are some two links that explain what run-on sentences are and how to fix them:

          https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writ … nsentences

          https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/educa … -sentences

          Remember, you must capitalize the first letter of a sentence. In this paragraph, you did not capitalize the first letter of two different sentences:

          "some people who backslide in churches are not always influenced by demons but the church leaders. some leaders don't know how to connect the needy to Jesus. They want people to feel that they have the authority to tell people what they think God is saying. They act wrongly and instead of being an encouragement they cause people to hate the church and eventually these people go to look for solutions somewhere when they were just a click away to their answer."

          1. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
            Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

            Read and reread this article that discusses the proper capitalization of titles and headings:

            https://owlcation.com/humanities/Rules- … an-Article

            1. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
              Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

              Here is an example of a heading that is not in proper capitalization format:

              “The faith that broke the silence”

              Here is how it should be written:

              The Faith That Broke the Silence

              1. Gregory DeVictor profile image97
                Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months agoin reply to this

                You wrote:

                “In conclusion ,it is an encourage to know that when we pray we should believe that God has heard and that in due season we shall receive what we are looking for.”

                “In conclusion” does not need to be in bold characters.

                Remove the space after the word conclusion and before the comma.

                “In conclusion ,it is an encourage” does not make any sense at all.

                Like I’ve been saying, you must read and reread and reread all of the links that I have given you.

            2. Barbara Kay profile image89
              Barbara Kayposted 8 months agoin reply to this

              I hadn't even read the article when I noticed that you didn't use capitalization in your titles and subtitles. Get busy and correct all this.

              1. Justine Mulenga profile image60
                Justine Mulengaposted 8 months agoin reply to this

                Thanks Barbara

      2. Justine Mulenga profile image60
        Justine Mulengaposted 8 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks very much. I am learning and with your help, I think I can make it.

 
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