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I'd like feedback on my article: The Mysteries of Kellyanne

  1. Peter Eze profile image59
    Peter Ezeposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Mysteries of Kellyanne (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      LOL porn... and then she threw him out of the window.

      1. Peter Eze profile image59
        Peter Ezeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        okay so erotic stories are not allowed right?

        1. theraggededge profile image98
          theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

          https://hubpages.com/faq/#adult_topics

          To be brutally honest, it's not very well written. However, if you want to write stories like this, then consider setting up your own blog. HubPages isn't the best place for creative writing in any case. They prefer informative, magazine-style articles that are search-friendly.

          Additionally, adult content won't attract revenue as ads will be disabled in order to avoid violating Adsense policy, so you won't earn anything from it.

          1. Peter Eze profile image59
            Peter Ezeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

            Thank you so much

    2. JynBranton profile image89
      JynBrantonposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      It's really interesting. But as they are all saying there wouldn't be a way to get ad revenue on it. But that said it's a good read.

  2. pen promulgates profile image53
    pen promulgatesposted 6 months ago

    I am really zapped by your story.
    It totally stuns. Perhaps, you have a unique thought process. The way the write up started, never could imagine it would steer to that direction.
    Have no new thoughts, I agree with Bev.

  3. carlajbehr profile image91
    carlajbehrposted 6 months ago

    "Pass" in the first sentence should be "Past"

  4. hiya-writer profile image76
    hiya-writerposted 6 months ago

    Check your spelling and grammar. I believe these topics are not accepted.

 
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