I'd like someone to check my article: Are Hurricanes Getting Stronger?

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  1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
    Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months ago

    Hello. I just recently published another article. Can you help me improve it?

    https://hubpages.com/politics/Are-Hurri … g-Stronger

    1. JynBranton profile image92
      JynBrantonposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      I really like your disclaimer to the climate deniers. With the volume of severe storms in the last few years, and especially this summer how can any deny the science behind climate change?

      1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you very much. I'm impressed that there's tons of climate deniers. I did censor the F word out. When I get to the computer, I'll try to improve grammar and spelling as best as possible.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 10 months ago

    There are some issues with capitalization as in Hurricane and Climate Change, these should be lower case.

    Also, I'd sprinkle the images throughout the text rather than stacking them in a heap.

    Hope that helps.

    1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
      Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      thanks. that'll help. I just need to get to my computer in order to do that. That'll happen later today at 1:00 PM.

    2. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
      Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      what about now?

  3. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
    Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months ago

    I made several changes to the article, which you can see right here.

    https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-Stronger

    What needs to be improved?

    I also put it under a new category.

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      Hi Erick, go through all the text and make sure you haven't capitalised words in error. Like this:

      "The 2017 Atlantic Hurricane Season" 

      "The 2017 Atlantic hurricane season"

      The words 'hurricane' and 'season' aren't 'proper nouns' so they don't need capitalising.

      "Sandy-Sized" should be "Sandy-sized".

      Hope that helps.

      1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        thanks. I'll go make sure to correct my mistakes when I get on the computer later today.

      2. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Have you forgotten that I can't edit articles in a PS3?

        1. theraggededge profile image98
          theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

          Why are you asking for suggestions to improve the hub then? big_smile

          I'm in the UK, I have no idea of your time zone or when you have access to a computer.

          1. gmwilliams profile image86
            gmwilliamsposted 10 months agoin reply to this

            Mr. Hernandez,  theraggededge is only helping you.

            1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
              Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

              I know.

          2. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
            Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

            I live in the Eastern Time Zone in Miami, FL, while you live in the UK.

  4. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
    Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months ago

    See if this article has improved.

    https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-Stronger

    I also put it in another new category.

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

      It's fine now. You worked hard and made a lot of improvements.

      1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        The question becomes whether or not it goes to a niche site.

      2. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        I think you should check it again. Double check to see any spelling or grammar or incorrect English.

        1. theraggededge profile image98
          theraggededgeposted 10 months agoin reply to this

          Ivan, you can't keep expecting me to view your hub. I've made all the suggestions I can, both here and by email. I can't be your personal editor, though I'm always happy to help when necessary.

          You have to be careful of being overly self-promotional too. Stop creating threads for the same hub. It's not even a rejected hub, so beware you don't get another ban wink

          1. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
            Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

            I know. third ban might limit my acceess towards hubpages for 30 days.

      3. Ivan Hernandez profile image91
        Ivan Hernandezposted 10 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you. I worked so hard on it.

 
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