Hello. I just recently published another article. Can you help me improve it?https://hubpages.com/politics/Are-Hurri … g-Stronger
I really like your disclaimer to the climate deniers. With the volume of severe storms in the last few years, and especially this summer how can any deny the science behind climate change?
Thank you very much. I'm impressed that there's tons of climate deniers. I did censor the F word out. When I get to the computer, I'll try to improve grammar and spelling as best as possible.
There are some issues with capitalization as in Hurricane and Climate Change, these should be lower case.Also, I'd sprinkle the images throughout the text rather than stacking them in a heap.Hope that helps.
thanks. that'll help. I just need to get to my computer in order to do that. That'll happen later today at 1:00 PM.
what about now?
I made several changes to the article, which you can see right here.https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-StrongerWhat needs to be improved?I also put it under a new category.
Hi Erick, go through all the text and make sure you haven't capitalised words in error. Like this:"The 2017 Atlantic Hurricane Season" "The 2017 Atlantic hurricane season"The words 'hurricane' and 'season' aren't 'proper nouns' so they don't need capitalising."Sandy-Sized" should be "Sandy-sized".Hope that helps.
thanks. I'll go make sure to correct my mistakes when I get on the computer later today.
Have you forgotten that I can't edit articles in a PS3?
Why are you asking for suggestions to improve the hub then? I'm in the UK, I have no idea of your time zone or when you have access to a computer.
Mr. Hernandez, theraggededge is only helping you.
I live in the Eastern Time Zone in Miami, FL, while you live in the UK.
See if this article has improved.https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-StrongerI also put it in another new category.
It's fine now. You worked hard and made a lot of improvements.
The question becomes whether or not it goes to a niche site.
I think you should check it again. Double check to see any spelling or grammar or incorrect English.
Ivan, you can't keep expecting me to view your hub. I've made all the suggestions I can, both here and by email. I can't be your personal editor, though I'm always happy to help when necessary.You have to be careful of being overly self-promotional too. Stop creating threads for the same hub. It's not even a rejected hub, so beware you don't get another ban
I know. third ban might limit my acceess towards hubpages for 30 days.
Thank you. I worked so hard on it.
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