I'd like someone to check my article: Are Hurricanes Getting Stronger?

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years ago

   Hello. I just recently published another article. Can you help me improve it?
   
   https://hubpages.com/politics/Are-Hurri … g-Stronger

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      JynBrantonposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I really like your disclaimer to the climate deniers. With the volume of severe storms in the last few years, and especially this summer how can any deny the science behind climate change?

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you very much. I'm impressed that there's tons of climate deniers. I did censor the F word out. When I get to the computer, I'll try to improve grammar and spelling as best as possible.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   There are some issues with capitalization as in Hurricane and Climate Change, these should be lower case.
   
   Also, I'd sprinkle the images throughout the text rather than stacking them in a heap.
   
   Hope that helps.

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      thanks. that'll help. I just need to get to my computer in order to do that. That'll happen later today at 1:00 PM.

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      what about now?

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years ago

   I made several changes to the article, which you can see right here.
   
   https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-Stronger
   
   What needs to be improved?
   
   I also put it under a new category.

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Erick, go through all the text and make sure you haven't capitalised words in error. Like this:
      
      "The 2017 Atlantic Hurricane Season" 
      
      "The 2017 Atlantic hurricane season"
      
      The words 'hurricane' and 'season' aren't 'proper nouns' so they don't need capitalising.
      
      "Sandy-Sized" should be "Sandy-sized".
      
      Hope that helps.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         thanks. I'll go make sure to correct my mistakes when I get on the computer later today.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Have you forgotten that I can't edit articles in a PS3?

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Why are you asking for suggestions to improve the hub then?
            
            I'm in the UK, I have no idea of your time zone or when you have access to a computer.

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               gmwilliamsposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Mr. Hernandez,  theraggededge is only helping you.

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                  Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

                  I know.

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               Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               I live in the Eastern Time Zone in Miami, FL, while you live in the UK.

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years ago

   See if this article has improved.
   
   https://hubpages.com/education/Are-Hurr … g-Stronger
   
   I also put it in another new category.

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      It's fine now. You worked hard and made a lot of improvements.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         The question becomes whether or not it goes to a niche site.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         I think you should check it again. Double check to see any spelling or grammar or incorrect English.

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Ivan, you can't keep expecting me to view your hub. I've made all the suggestions I can, both here and by email. I can't be your personal editor, though I'm always happy to help when necessary.
            
            You have to be careful of being overly self-promotional too. Stop creating threads for the same hub. It's not even a rejected hub, so beware you don't get another ban

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               Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               I know. third ban might limit my acceess towards hubpages for 30 days.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you. I worked so hard on it.

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