I'd like feedback on my article: Homemade Christmas gifts for the Beauty Lovers.

  1. Engelta profile image75
    Engeltaposted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Homemade Christmas gifts for the Beauty Lovers.. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marketing Merit profile image97
      Marketing Meritposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      In addition to the above, your images are watermarked and it is unclear if you have permission to use them. If you are writing about something that is homemade, then you should take photos of your product. It adds credibility to your article.

  2. Marisa Wright profile image99
    Marisa Wrightposted 13 days ago

    The first thing that strikes me is that your title isn't what your Hub is about.  The title says it's about general gifts, but the article is about scrubs.  Therefore the title should be about scrubs.

    Some of your English is a bit convoluted and needs editing.

 
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