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I'd like feedback on my article: Why I Love My Serta EZ Queen Guest Bed

  1. newbizmau profile image90
    newbizmauposted 12 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Why I Love My Serta EZ Queen Guest Bed. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 12 days ago

    The hubpages idea is to review items you use, leading with a photo of the time in your house is the quickest way to demonstrate that. Failing that your actual experiences with it.

  3. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 12 days ago

    Some tips:

    1) Don't be afraid to full-width photo capsules.
    2) Find ways to break up your largest text chunks, like the one in the "Store It In Your Closet" heading.
    3) Watch out for typos, like the correct form of "its." Reword awkward sentences like "They always ask where I got it and want to get one for themselves for their own guest."
    4) Avoid using too much repetition and passive voice. Try not to say "this is" so much; diversify things with dynamic action verbs.
    5) If your word count is below 700, try inching it closer to 1000.
    6) HubPages is picky about Amazon; make sure you clearly discuss your personal experience with the link near the end.

    Best of luck.

    1. newbizmau profile image90
      newbizmauposted 12 days agoin reply to this

      I appreciate all the great edit suggestions. I will keep working on it.

 
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