I'd like feedback on my article: The Real Merlin - Magician, Philosoph

  1. newbizmau profile image91
    newbizmauposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Real Merlin - Magician, Philosopher, Druid, and Storyteller. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    First, I would get rid of the outgoing links. HP wants articles that are complete in themselves; they don't want people leaving pages for more information.

    A closer proofread should  help get rid of a few typos. I noticed a the the.

    Capital letters are only for proper nouns, in this sentence that means only Merlin and Druid. "Merlin was a Master Teacher, Magician, Mystic, Philosopher, Druid, Shaman, Monk, Storyteller, Bard, and Astronomer."

    There are several inappropriate capital letters elsewhere in your article.

    1. newbizmau profile image91
      newbizmauposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks a lot. I know that but I missed all over that. I think because they were all things he was called I made them proper names in my head.
      Thanks I'll fix it.

 
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