Why my article has not been published in-spite so much efforts i did

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   ajitcposted 6 years ago

   Hello All,
   I did put in lot of hardwork to improve my article to get it published but still it is not published.
   The article can be viewed here https://hubpages.com/education/MBA-VS-P … lumjm90y5s
   
   The following changes the did:
   I changed the title on recommendation of some senior members.
   I did grammar check,punctuation errors check on Ginger software.
   I added new image to make the article look interesting.Now the article has two images.
   I did check the violations test and it shows the article does not violate any rules.
   
   I just do not understand what i need to do in order to get the article published.Where i am i going wrong.Can the moderator who keeps on unpublishing the article tell me as what should I do in order to get my article published?
   
   I request somebody to please guide me specially this request is to the moderator.Please help me and guide me to get my article published.
   
   Regards,
   Ajit

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I checked your article. You have several grammar and title case and title errors. Instead of saying the obvious title theme, which is saying what the title is going to be aboUT before putting in the text, why not put a vague but interesting title and then pit the paragraph in. Your article is not good. I can't help you there. All I can say is APA title case is very important. Improve grammar. Seriously.

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Also, you can't call the moderators on demand. They'll come when they'll come. Meanwhile, check out Marisas article on how to create a stellar hub. Also check out the frequently asked questions regarding hubpages over there
      
      https://hubpages.com/faq

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      Marketing Meritposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      As others have stated above, your command of the English language is the primary problem.
      
      However, I also have to question the topic. You make no reference to the fact that you are writing about the education system in India. This is unlikely to attract a global audience as each country has its own education system, with varying entry requirements and fees.

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Sorry.  Can't see the article.

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   AliciaCposted 6 years ago

   Ajit, I'm sorry that you're having so much trouble getting your article published after all your effort. I think one problem may be that you're expecting too much from software that checks grammar. In general, the software is not as good as a human proofreader or editor. (I've never used the program that you used, though.) There are still English errors in your article. You should probably look for someone who is an expert in English and ask them to proofread your article.

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 6 years ago

   Grammarly may be the problem. Some grammar apps are incompatible with hubpages and your hubs. Why don't you try removing the app or grammarly and use the free one on grammarcheck. Also, I haven't read the article, but judging by the lack of publication, you have one or more problems, such as constant grammar misuse, spelling misuse, puntuation misuse, low quality article, overpromotion or too many amazon links, too few words (750 is the bare minimum for publication or passing the qap, images that don't represent the articles title, bad titles., or any of the above. Also, too many links will un publish your article. Is that clear?

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   Titiaposted 6 years ago

   I took a quick look at your article and besides the grammar/typo errors I see you used only two text capsules. I would advice you to put each part in their own text capsule with the bolded text as subtitle. Titles and subtitles should be capitalized.
   
   Let's have a little in-depth view on the topic of MBA: should be written like this: Let's Have a Little In-Depth View on the Topic of Mba: and that goes for all titles and subtitles.
   
   You can use this program to capitilize your titles https://capitalizemytitle.com/
   
   I use the grammar/typo correction in my MS Word and so far it does a great job.

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   Marisa Wrightposted 6 years ago

   The big problem with this article is that English is your second language, and that is very obvious from your text.  Even your title has incorrect grammar.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 6 years ago

   "Page not found"
   I guess he gave up.

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   ajitcposted 6 years ago

   Thankyou all for your valuable feedback.I will look into how can i improve my article.Probably proof reading is the way.
   
   Regards,
   Ajit

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