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I'd like feedback on my article: Now is a Great Time to Invest in Tesla Stock

  1. Chuck Bluestein profile image62
    Chuck Bluesteinposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Now is a Great Time to Invest in Tesla Stock. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Ken Burgess profile image88
      Ken Burgessposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Great topic, you have a lot of information to work with there.

      Photos are going to go 'full size' soon, so perhaps you could re-position them prior to that so they are placed appropriately.  HP is doing away with the small side photo option.

      I suggest instead of having updates all over the article, you consider a rewrite of the article, fully up to date, so that you provide all the information you want in a way that flows without the several update notices.

      And consider how to make the presentation flow better for example:

      "Its batteries and solar cells prevent brown-outs in California, powers an island in Hawaii and powers an area in South Australia that has trouble with grid. Passed Ford and GM becoming largest auto maker in U.S. Just passed Mercedes Benz becoming third largest car company in world. Toyota is the biggest."

      TO

      Tesla has built some of the largest battery storage plants and solar fields in the world, which help power and prevent brown-outs in places like California, Hawaii and South Australia.  Tesla has passed Ford and GM as the largest auto maker in the U.S. and according to ___source___ just passed Mercedes Benz becoming the third largest car company in the world, with only Toyota and _____ being larger.

      I hope that helps.

  2. Marisa Wright profile image98
    Marisa Wrightposted 2 months ago

    The reason this Hub has failed QAP is, again, the Amazon capsules.

    Although you give a detailed explanation of the first book, you do not couch it in personal terms.  The moderator could think you've simply copied that info from the book jacket.  You need to include phrases which indicate you've read the book (i.e. using "I", "my" or "mine", and expressing your own opinions about it). 

    The other Amazon capsules are "illegal" too, for reasons already explained.

    As Ken says, you need to fix the photos so they will display properly once the half-width capsules are discontinued.

  3. Robert Sacchi profile image83
    Robert Sacchiposted 2 months ago

    You may want to get rid of the links to other articles.  While they improve the article from my point of view HubPages doesn't seem to like them.  You may also want to cut down on the bolding.  This is another thing I believe improves the article but HubPages doesn't seem to like them.  Do a check on your word count.  You have 4 Amazon capsules.  If you have less than 1,600 words they might give you grief on that.  Good luck.

    1. Marisa Wright profile image98
      Marisa Wrightposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      The idea that HubPages doesn't like links is a myth.  Just take a look at almost any article on HealDove - most of them are a sea of blue links!   So HubPages loves links, provided they're the right kind of links.

      The rules are strict.

      1.  The link must be directly related to the main topic of the Hub. That means you can't mention something in passing, and offer readers a link to find out more about it (which is frustrating, but it's the rule).

      2. When you're linking to a website, you must link to the specific page of that website which is relevant (not to the home page).

 
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