let's write a poem line by line

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

   she shares her chocolate
   gives him just one square
   pulls away her toe
   she just don't care

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   ralwusposted 16 years ago

   Well my little Irish pie
   says the Walrus with a gleem in his eye.
   I know what will quit your being so pissky
   I'll give you some good Irish whiskey.

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

   i will probably throw up
   all over you
   then tell me
   Walrus what would you do?

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   ralwusposted 16 years ago

   hahaha. I'm glad she came.

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   I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

   The ralwus let the mermaid be
   understands she must fly free
   like a dove cuising the high sea
   in the air, fluttering feet
   she's been so inspired to express her love
   written words of heartbeats be

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   zampanoposted 16 years ago

   Love
   a root, a stem, a leaf, a flower
   an ankle, a thigh, the breasts of a mistress
   sadness, joy, weakness, power
   nothing's best than a good pint o'guiness.
   
   hehehe

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   I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

   His lovers breast
   grazes his chest
   removes him of his power
   though seedless still seeks a flower
   
   
   
   
   he he he

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   Helen Caterposted 16 years ago

   Four lines to a poem is hard to write
   My lovelies can't count now what a plight
   Words flow from the tongue in adjacent lines
   They meet in the middle and kiss goodnight!

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   zampanoposted 16 years ago

   love's sweetness not for long
   shreds of heart crowd the place
   sadness and pain refrain the song
   that leads them souls on the final race...
   
   sniff...

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

    the broken tune of deep wound
    seeks solice under painted sky
    time of questions loom
    tide crashes on a beach once dry

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    that beach now surrounded
    the tide is in for sure
    and as the water drifted in
    it's gentleness did cure

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    That regenerating tide
    my love's moon is gathering
    brings to life seeds once dried
    that again exulting to her I bring

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    ralwusposted 16 years ago

    Oh oyster, oyster of the sea
    please come dancing with me.
    I let the waves crash over me
    Seeking more for love from thee.

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    A crashing wave
    a big walrus inside
    everyone ran safe
    so huge was the tide
    
    hehehe

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

    into the sea 
    walrus did swell
    pot-bellied fish
    into the well
    
    he he he

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    ralwusposted 16 years ago

    Oh you guys are funny. LOL

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    in a more depressive manner :
    
    My blue light is fading
    my soul is emptying, my heart is dry
    the moon horse is gently waiting
    for the moment we both again fly
    
    blue light, blue light !
    Love eternal never dies
    bring back the precious sight
    you once threw on my marvelled eyes
    
    descending tide, hears no cries...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

    I think she was hoping for a .....PETER! lol 

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    what  are you talking about  Peter at the pearly gates...
    
    lets get this poem going again  now

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    yahoo Jess where have you gone you added nothing

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    you do it for him then.... i think you two know each other do you???

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    you the  psycho man it is you help

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    i don't think i am wrong on the psycho front .... are you going to write anything or just annoy me

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    Jess Killmenowposted 16 years ago

    what happened to the poem?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    well it all got messed up looks like ..... you messed it up actually if you look back

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    tantrumposted 16 years ago

    i deleted all my posts. If I bother u I'm sorry. thought you have sense of humour   bye !!

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    tantrum, don't be silly.
    Let's restore the archives.
    I like to read you.
    I like the poem about rock & lime and the limbo.
    and I was about to re-read it
    and I admire your courage too...
    sad am I

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         I'm not silly! I'm being sensible. If I'm bothering the lady I'm off. I'm a gentleman

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    Look! Am I off ?

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         Why should u b off ? ur not botering anyone... Anyway I'ts OK with me, i can't b bothered! thank you 4 ur support

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          Anti-Valentineposted 16 years agoin reply to this

          Having fun I see, Tantrum.

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             tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

             Hi anti!! ...As always....

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                Anti-Valentineposted 16 years agoin reply to this

                Good.

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    you are frowning like in the picture.
    come on ! Twickele, fiddle, tease
    all these things may be disturbing lecture
    but by no means desease that all unease, rather a breeze...

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         go off and sneeze !!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    what did i say........ sorry whatever i did to upset you...... oops, i am always doing the wrong thing

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    is this a tantrum

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         So what do you expect?? You're telling me I annoy you, I quit. No hard feelings. Not all of us have the same sense of humor

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    atchooom !

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

          God bless

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    i do have a sense of humour but you don't understand it is all...... you do not annoy me really at all sorry

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         It's O. K ! forget it.  WE're still friends And I love Ireland!! (and I mean it )

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    o.k. then are you putting my poem back up

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

       It's there. You saved it

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    thank you tantrum.
    where would we be if everybody had the same sense of humour.
    that doens't exist.
    Hope you're having fun and the anti-thing there, too.
    
    com on let's sing a song :
    I've been a wild roamer for many the yeeeeeeeears
    and I spent all me money on whiskey and beeeeeeeeeer
    
    ...

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

       Thank you !  Hope ur having fun 2 !!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    are you really just a big pussy cat... i like you

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

       

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    aw friends make the world go round....... thnks for the poem.... i throw tantrums a lot too, but not as many since i take prozac

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    so we start from before "A Friends Changed Behavior"
    
    Glad am I ?
    Barefoot children looking for a drop of water
    guns in their hands, shooting whatever stands
    no sin, no feelings in perpetrated slaughter
    as they move on, adults, parents, masters wash their hands.

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 16 years ago

    hmmm... I really missed something here a bit earlier it seems...I will come back when it becomes lovey again.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years ago

    a beautiful sunny day
    making everyone smile
    3oo fans join in with me
    let's test our writing style

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    in fact, it was a sunny day in paris
    listen
    been celebrating your medal :
    
    so harsh in my gorge
    was that last whiskey
    that beer came soothing the burning forge
    wanted to go home, but have lost my key ...
    
    hihihi

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       Jess Killmenowposted 16 years agoin reply to this

       if only i'd drunk a little more
       that bush looks good for sleeping on
       when he saw me last my doctor swore
       i should try to sleep on firmer lawns

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    hahaha
    that can be tough Jess.
    have to have someone who you trust your keys and the wheel.

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    El-Saidposted 16 years ago

    Sense of humour,
    So extravagantly displayed,
    Sensing honour from whom is due,
    For all may be the same yet different.

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    chukra Gposted 16 years ago

    i guess i will be the chorus here
    
    Though tired after a long day
           I am staying up writing
           Just having my say
           beginning a rhyme that will go on and on......
    
           now it is a poor beginning but i am tired..
                anyone want to add next lines
                keep it rhyming
    
    and add some music
    laaaaa lala la la la boom boom cha cha
    
    sorry

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 16 years agoin reply to this

       started bad ended bad new it was a really bad idea

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       tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

         So you're having your say...and something else ! As usual 

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          chukra Gposted 16 years agoin reply to this

          do you know that you got good humour sense

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             tantrumposted 16 years agoin reply to this

               and u 2. I'm fanning you

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    it is well worthwhile.

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    let jesters, fools and troubadours
    fill this place with their art
    songs, poems, jokes, all that lures
    to finest feelings refined, to a good heart

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    tantrumposted 16 years ago

    jesters and fools
    you will find
    when a thread is let loose
    to all minds.

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    pussycat. pffffffff !

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    zampanoposted 16 years ago

    Brenda Scully I thank thee
    for those not gifted to poetry.
    the thread You've started for sometime
    doesn't run empty, still calls the rime
    this great finding I've had
    is due to the grace you gave
    lighted heart or grave
    infinite styles we have still to add

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