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let's write a poem line by line

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    no more than 4 lines.... and we need them to rhyme...


           Though tired after a long day
           I am staying up writing
           Just having my say
           beginning a rhyme that will go on and on......

           now it is a poor beginning but i am tired..
                anyone want to add next lines
                keep it rhyming

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    1. Drew Breezzy profile image72
      Drew Breezzyposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      an endless rhyme like the numbers pi
      filled of who whats whens and whys
      metaphors and similes
      where this rhyme is headed I can not see

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    maybe this is a really bad idea... and we should quit while we are ahead

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    Noooo ! Don't stop.
    Me too :

    Infinite white pages
    slowly filled word by word
    thoughts often sharp like a sword
    Mineral memories frozen for ages...


    I like this game
    Come on.
    More !

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    hunger and wanting,
    a hidden treasure
    deep in this poem
    just write at your leisure......

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  5. B.Z. Alixandre profile image74
    B.Z. Alixandreposted 8 years ago

    found in black and white spaces
    are locks and keys for secret places
    the wanderers among pages
    lost through lands and ages

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    though waiting to be found....
    in the air and on the ground
    secrets hidden in hearts and minds
    He who has the key ... is the one who finds...

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    hidden indeed is the treasure
    thirst is never quenched, hunger never satiated
    of the one who seeks to grasp its measure
    for that illusion vanishes as soon as it is created

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  8. dohn121 profile image83
    dohn121posted 8 years ago

    And I'll leave this heart of mine,
    For the lonely one to find,
    And break the soft caress
    of sweet tenderness

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    A tender heart a tender mind.....
    search for it and try to find
    A sweet caress, a smile so warm
    A protective hand to keep you from harm

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  10. love my yorkies profile image60
    love my yorkiesposted 8 years ago

    As the pitter patter of rain
    beats against the window pane
    someone softly calls my name
    and says it's time to begin a game

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    blUe 2

    seagulls flying across blue sky,
    glad am I, glad am I
    sunlight playing on waters blue down by,
    glad am I, glad am I
    blue horizons revealing land hills high,
    glad am I, glad am I

    The journey is almost done, my love's waiting has now become brief.
    As blue becomes deep, the wind gently drives me towards her kind relief.

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      \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      this is a great one shall we carry on from here

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      1. Jess Killmenow profile image60
        Jess Killmenowposted 8 years agoin reply to this
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  12. love my yorkies profile image60
    love my yorkiesposted 8 years ago

    velvety black with white diamond light
    i sit back and look up into the night
    for mystical and magical sights do I see
    and what may be up there that's looking back at me

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  13. Bibowen profile image97
    Bibowenposted 8 years ago

    Who's looking back? I do not know?
    Are they like us? Are they friend or foe?
    Asking the same questions, perhaps they look
    toward their night sky, their celestial book.

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  14. The Scarecrow profile image53
    The Scarecrowposted 8 years ago

    I wish I could find the perfect love.
    The one that last forever.
    I wish I could find the perfect love.
    My heart would cherish that favor.

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  15. XTASIS profile image55
    XTASISposted 8 years ago

    They are the ones that all will tell,
    fables of old, magickal spells,
    Misteries hidden in caves and wells,
    Mythical waters where white nymphs dwell.

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  16. Bibowen profile image97
    Bibowenposted 8 years ago

    I have not trod this path before
    though I've heard it in tales of lore
    of all the myst'ries  under lock and seal
    to await some moment to reveal

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  17. XTASIS profile image55
    XTASISposted 8 years ago

    Then you will come across the bank
    Of river Styx. And fast and frank
    The boatman's coming for your soul.
    Oh hurry up ! Give him your gold!

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    mtsi1098posted 8 years ago

    too wise you are
    too wise you be
    i see you are
    too wise for me...

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  19. Sally's Trove profile image81
    Sally's Troveposted 8 years ago

    A moment of oblivion
    Descends from this horizon
    A respite clear and pure
    And free of manic imaginings

    Gold holds no value
    But the glitter of its allure.

    I rest my heart along this path
    Of words contributed
    By souls yet to meet
    And soothe my weary feet.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    one step at a time ...
    let's take it slow
    talk about the places
    where you and I may go

    A little wine
    A kiss divine
    Under the moon and the stars above
    The perfect place for a couple in love

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    Lovers ride the night on a moon horse
    caring not of fate ahead, in tight embrace
    white silver light casts over their aerial course
    world enters a new day, lovers found the perfect place...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    a blue rose by a different name
       Even though The  time zone is the same
       Horse tilted toward the moon
       Looks like the  journey will start
                very soon

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  23. Eaglekiwi profile image80
    Eaglekiwiposted 8 years ago

    As the air heady with perfume
    Fills every living being
    No voice is left silent
    As loves hunger arouses the soul

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    The soul and the spirit
    And everything beside
    The horse starts to canter
    Hang on for the ride

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  25. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years ago

    towards silent treasure not many will ever know
    a love glistening beyond pleasure roam
    their selfless hearts up the measure
    true love has found its test
    unconditional hearts divinely mesh

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    Two hearts now are beating as one at last
    Shyness and sadness are a thing of the past
    As the moon shines down on the loving pair
    People stop in their tracks to sit and stare
    As the lovers embrace,and they shoot the next scene
    A film made in paradise ......soon for the big screen

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    light knock at my door.
    would that be someone gently calling ?
    outside, snow was covering the moore
    The blue light descending from the sky was strangely warming

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    hahaha
    getting a bit mystical aren't we ?

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    1. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      smile anything imaginable can be attained.

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  29. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years ago

    between my thighs
    you paralyze,
    tantalize,
    bewitching size

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  30. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years ago

    Mornng glory,cuddle and rest
    Simple pleasurs within our nest
    Sunday paper, Twix and tea
    Some fond pleasures for you and me

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    Amazing Grace !

    consuming fire
    dampness sweet in my head
    riding your hills and valleys
    blue becomes red...

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  32. Senny Roberts profile image54
    Senny Robertsposted 8 years ago

    sleep has come to capture me
    to dance apon a dreaming sea
    yet inhibitions wont leave me be
    - i need to wake so urgently

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  33. Senny Roberts profile image54
    Senny Robertsposted 8 years ago

    so i can caress your fingertips
    and wonder at those heavy thighs
    and i can kiss your sleeping lips
    and see your lovely lieing eyes.

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  34. El-Said profile image60
    El-Saidposted 8 years ago

    For my freedom to rest,
    After a hictic day is infrighed,
    By a stroke of fun and loneliness,
    That though arose some nostalgia,
    I itch to see you close as cloth,

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  35. El-Said profile image60
    El-Saidposted 8 years ago

    And the wind of pleasure,
    Blossom an exquisite taste,
    That swept my feet to bow,
    At an estacy yet uncovered,
    kisses so long as the beginning of time.

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    Michael Achillesposted 8 years ago

    Time has been kind
    in streams of wine
    singing in the hollows
    of a love Divine.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    She wears around her neck a beautiful chain
    A gift from this man of the night
    He wants to keep her close to him
    Will not let her away from his sight

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  38. dohn121 profile image83
    dohn121posted 8 years ago

    But how folorn is her heart in the night,
    Time stands still whilst her mind takes plight,
    Of beautiful meadows with frolicking does,
    Outside her murk of pining window.

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  39. dohn121 profile image83
    dohn121posted 8 years ago

    Across the sea is where she wishes to be,
    With heart strung words, spoken happily,
    Upon her ears like tender kisses;
    He is the one she truly misses.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    she flies through sky , Rather than the sea....
    Later today around two or three
    kisses and cuddles .......she embraces
    Her lover takes her to many different places

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  41. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years ago

    bleeding love down the vine
    hope it's only a matter o time
    for flesh connection as of heart and mind
    the power of two, mystery to find

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  42. El-Said profile image60
    El-Saidposted 8 years ago

    when darkness fall,
    The tears of heavens fall,
    And the ocean stormed,
    cold and fear mixed in mind,

    Her strong hold on blanket,
    To sort the soul in loneliness,
    Then a door ajar,
    A swift move approaches,
    Who could that be?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    A mystery locked within the power of two..
    Amazing what a * can do...
    When it appears upon the screen
    The fantasy emerges it becomes a dream

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  44. El-Said profile image60
    El-Saidposted 8 years ago

    The slumber is short,
    cut by a familiar touch,
    And a subtle kiss on the chin,
    gently she open her eyes,

    Her beloved hero,
    By the bed in his pajamas,
    With a seductive smile in his face,
    His eyes are red longing for a hug,

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  45. I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image59
    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 8 years ago

    a dream so real
    can't help but feel
    tantilizing tickle upon his smooth skin
    the magical flow, racing heart within

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      ralwusposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Her hands like the whisper of a flea
      tickle my fancy and I am free!
      This is a dream so fulfilling
      To have one who is so willing.

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  46. manlypoetryman profile image75
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    Brenda S. is "Bringing it" with the Poe-try...
    Calling on all to write Poems for everyone to see...
    Poem Words form at the heart...Begging to be Free...
    Bringing us together for a purpose...aligning our Words...

    Remarkably Internationally.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    yes come on give all the poets a nudge.... we will get it published..... give that Chris A a gentle nudge someone please...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    poets of the world unite here it is

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    but she turns and walks the other way
    fed up now of all his play
    Sends  him of and laughs with glee
    eats chocolate in front of the wide screen t.v.

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    ralwusposted 8 years ago

    But she cannot resist him as he sucks her toe
    and willingly plays along.
    The penguin in chocolate lies
    With walrus singing his song.

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