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Free games review hub - constructive critique?

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    lewankerposted 10 years ago

    As the title said, I would very much like some constructive critique on my first hub.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Free-Games-For-All

    I try to write good fun informative game reviews for everyone.

    1. makemoneyonline profile image33
      makemoneyonlineposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Not very appealing for a gaming article especially if the public target are children : lack of pictures, videos smile

  2. darkside profile image82
    darksideposted 10 years ago

    I wouldn't have a Comments Capsule at the top of the hub.

    And there seems to be a mess of ";amp;amp;amp;amp" on one of the reviews.

    The reviews are on the light side. And would need accompanying images if you want to keep your readers attention.

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    lewankerposted 10 years ago

    Thanks for your reply. Comments are now at the bottom.

    As to your other comments:

    The amp; stuff is because of an embedded game in the blog, which RSS-feed I'm using, I don't know if it's possible to edit that in hubpages(?)

    Reviews are not the main focus of this blog, it's just there to give a little more spice, instead of just download links, and a thumbnail. I personally don't need to read that much text, when it's free, anyway:-)

    As for images, they didn't get imported with the feed. Am I doing something wrong?

    I'm such a noob:-P

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    lewankerposted 10 years ago

    Original blog is here, by the way:

    http://freegamestoplaynow.blogspot.com/

    1. makemoneyonline profile image33
      makemoneyonlineposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      It looks better with pictures. But If you're duplicating content that's no good for Google: you will get penalized.

 
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