I wrote a series of hubs (4) on Jealousy. I am desiring to take this series in another direction, so I would like to get additional comments to further my efforts. Please read the series and let me know your opinion. I'm not sure if the hubs are worthy to take any further. Please help! Thank you for your support.
I've had a quick look at your first two Hubs.
I feel they're too text-heavy. Split your text up over several capsules. Use the green arrows on your photo, video and Amazon/eBay capsules to float them to the right of your text capsules. That will break up the text and make it look less indigestible.
I also think there's a fine line between being folksy and rambling on. All your Hubs could do with some stringent editing to make the language cleaner, so people don't have to read so many words before you get to the point. I know I lost interest fairly quickly because I couldn't say where you were going with it.
It would hold my interest much more if you treated each scenario separately, giving each its own Hub and taking it all the way from start to finish, rather than taking two Hubs to introduce all these people - why should I, as a reader, keep reading?
by Ponx7 years ago
Hi everyone, I joined HubPages 2 weeks back and I have been trying to write at least 2 hubs per week (even with my job at hand)....I feel that the HubPages members are very helpful and are more than eager to help out...
by cyndeehaydon10 years ago
Was hoping to get some feedback on my first hub. The thing that confused me is that when I added photos it seemed to take away points - does that sound right. I do blogging and always feel photos help the reader...
by Susie Lehto2 years ago
"Techo" Matt,This has been happening for some time on all of my hubs.When I open a Text Capsule and copy and paste content in, it does not show the text until I hit Save. EXAMPLE:I published...
by Siddhartha Speaks2 years ago
Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub All about Hailing Mother India (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
by Aprilfreelance10 years ago
I published my first hub today in response to one of the requests. I would love any feedback you can offer on formatting, length, info provided, etc. I am a published writer, but new to Hubpages. I...
by Jason Menayan6 years ago
Hi everyone,Please have a look at Norah's blog post about an upcoming policy change regarding banners on Hubs encouraging readers to provide feedback. As of February 1st, these will not be allowed and Hubs with them can...
Copyright © 2018 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.
Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners.
HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc.
HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.