I'd like feedback on my article: Winning Control Over Eating Disorders Part 1

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   DeBorrah K. Ogansposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Winning Control Over Eating Disorders Part 1. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   psycheskinnerposted 7 years ago

   You need to remove the extra lines between paragraphs and explain why the pictures and book advertisement at the end are there.

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      DeBorrah K. Ogansposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Psycheskinner, I have made the suggested  corrections. Thank You for taking time to respond

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   Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years ago

   You must capitalize all of the words in your title and section headings with the exception of definite and indefinite articles, prepositions, and conjunctions. The only exception here is when the definite or indefinite article, preposition, and conjunction is the first word of your title or section heading.

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      DeBorrah K. Ogansposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Gregory DeVictor, Your comments are helpful.  I have made the necessary corrections. Thank You for taking time to respond.

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   DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

   The reason you did not pass the QA procedure is that huge block of pictures. They have nothing to do with the article and for all they can tell they were just stolen off of Google. If you really expect this to pass you need to delete them.
   The second reason is that spammy Amazon capsule. In order to be accepted, an Amazon product has to be something you bought and used. You have to leave a comment telling what benefits it had and why you recommend it.

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      DeBorrah K. Ogansposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      DrMark, The pictures were not stolen.  This hub was  written in  an older format that needed to be updated. At the time  the pictures were along side of  the relevant paragraph.  I have  removed some and placed  relevant captions on those that remain.  Thank You!

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         DrMark1961posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Great, but you need to add source info under each one so that HP knows that. Also, any pix with watermarks or other writing on them should be deleted. The captions will help a lot too since when people are searching your images might come up.
         Good luck with all of those changes.

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