I'd like feedback on my article: Everything You Need to Know about Prune Juice..

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   Gayatrimadhuposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Everything You Need to Know about Prune Juice and its Health Benefits. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Mek Kamongmenanposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Your topic should read as "Biological features of Prune Juice and its nutrients Benefits", for these words carry the strongest potential for influence and often appeal to people at a very deep emotional level. My contribution for your article improvement.

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   Gayatrimadhuposted 7 years ago

   Thanks a lot for your contribution. Will tweak the title accordingly.

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   theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

   Completely disagree about the title (not topic). You need a title that people are searching for:
   
   What Are the Benefits of Prune Juice?
   
   Note the capitalisation.
   
   No-one is searching for 'biological features', I promise you. The keyphrase, which you should repeat once or twice in the text is 'benefits of prune juice'. Work it into the writing in a natural way.

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   CYong74posted 7 years ago

   Biological features might ... be the search phrase used by certain people for ......
   
   On a serious note, use Google Keyword Planner to identify ideal keywords. Use that too to identify semantic synonyms to further enhance your SEO.

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   DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

   You make a lot of health claims in the article, and say that there is research done, but you provide no references or links to medical sites that contain the research. Even if this article is featured on Hubpages main site it will not be moved to a vertical site.
   The Amazon capsules are spammy. If you use an Amazon capsule, it should be for a product with which you have personal experience. If you are just adding it to make a sale, it is not going to be approved and will either cause your article to fail or be snipped.
   You should be using photos from creative commons and not just taking them from other sites.
   Try tweaking the title again. "Nutritional Facts..." sounds kind of lunkyI I doubt many people are going to end up clicking on it.
   There is a lot of work to do still but you have obviously already done a lot of reading on plums and prune juice. It was an interesting article.

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   lobobrandonposted 7 years ago

   I did not read the other suggestions, but I would suggest the following changes:
   
   Do not put heading tags in bullet points, That is not how headings are meant to be used. I would remove the bullets and keep the headings.
   
   Remove the Amazon capsule, you have not added anything personal there that is not already found on Amazon.
   
   All your headings must be capitalized in APA style, use this: https://capitalizemytitle.com
   
   A recipe usually lists ingredients and steps. You do not seem to be doing this, I would suggest you change this to something on the lines of: How to Make Prune Juice at Home
   
   Any specific reason why you bolded dry plums at the end and also at the start?
   
   P.S: I did not read any content, just looked at the formating and structure.

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      Gayatrimadhuposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your suggestions.

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   aesta1posted 7 years ago

   I like your pictures.
   The Amazon capsules without any description will be enough to not you pass the QAP.
   You can use the title suggested by theraggededge. With this title, you still can include facts about prune juice. Make sure your title follow APA style.

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      Gayatrimadhuposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you for your valuable feedback!

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