Feedback on my article

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   Yusrasumair123posted 7 years ago

   Hey hubbers!
   I’d like a feedback on my article that didn’t pass the quality assessment test unfortunately. What shall I improve?
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Give-it-a-thought

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   daydreamsposted 7 years ago

   I think it is mostly grammar, that's stopping it get featured.
   
   The title also didn't tell me what the article is about.

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      Yusrasumair123posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Do you have a better title in your mind? Please let me know

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         DrMark1961posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         You can try to organize it first and make it about something that others can understand. The way that it is written now it appears to be the types of random thoughts a person might have when taking a shower.
         
         1.Decide what it is about.
         2.Write an outline, and decide what keyword you are using to attract readers.
         3. Search for similar articles in Google and see what your article is lacking.
         4. Enter your main keywords into a tool like ubersuggest and find out what kind of questions people are asking about the subject.
         5. Write your article using what you have learned.
         6. Write a title that tells the reader what it is about.
         
         You do not have to do all of this, but if you ever expect to draw a significant number of readers to your article this is the best way to go about it.

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            Yusrasumair123posted 7 years agoin reply to this

            Okay, Thankyou

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   Yusrasumair123posted 7 years ago

   I just wrote this article to eradicate negative thinking.

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   D33PTHINK3Rposted 7 years ago

   I am really new here too. But I would say you need to add some more modules. Write a little more. Copy and paste your writing into a free grammar checker to make sure it's understandable. Looks like a good start but surely room for improvement! Keep trying! Pay attention to those little check marks at the right of the hub, those squares, they tell you what you need to do also. Good Luck!

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   Yusrasumair123posted 7 years ago

   Hey! Thanks for your feedback.
   I’ll try to add more stuff.

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   Yusrasumair123posted 7 years ago

   Thanks for the suggestions guys. My article got featured, yaay.

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