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  1. Ekcedeon profile image95
    Ekcedeonposted 7 years ago

    Hello to the entire HubPages community. I have been reading and observing the HubPages forum since I joined. I know most of you are quite busy but if any of you have the time, kindly proofread my article and give me your feedback. I know HubPages is all about quality so, since am new here I need all the help possible. And yes, I have already started to read articles from the learning center and questions and answers posted here.
    Almost forgot, here is the link http://hub.me/am1Bm

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    1. theraggededge profile image82
      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your writing is very good.

      I would suggest that you make more use of bullet points when the points you are making are short.

      Also read your text out loud which helps your brain pick up overlooked errors. There was one paragraph where the first letter wasn't capitalized. I closed the tab down now so can't remember which one. Quite far down the page, I think.

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      1. Ekcedeon profile image95
        Ekcedeonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you theraggededge, for your compliment and more so your suggests to improve my article.
        I'm working on the changes, will let you know when am finished.

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      2. Ekcedeon profile image95
        Ekcedeonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Hi! theraggededge, finished with the changes, leave me your feedback, thank you.

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  2. DrMark1961 profile image98
    DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

    You also need to change your title. It is clumsy and even if someone is looking for this subject and finds your article they are unlikely to click on it because of that title. The reader will assume that the whole article is similar.

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    1. Ekcedeon profile image95
      Ekcedeonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Mark,
      Tittle changed from; Best Top 10 Marriage Advice for Christian Couples
      To;10 Marriage Advice for Christian Couples
      it sounds more free-flowing now

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      1. Natalie Frank profile image80
        Natalie Frankposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        10 Marriage Advice doesn't really make sense.  I'd drop the 10 though you could maybe try something like Top 10 Pieces of Marriage Advice . . . or something similar.

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        1. Ekcedeon profile image95
          Ekcedeonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          An excellent suggestion Natalie, thank you

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  3. peachpurple profile image84
    peachpurpleposted 7 years ago

    Your SOlution part i that Striking, not obvious. Maybe you can Bold and change the fonts or put them into the callouts

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    1. Ekcedeon profile image95
      Ekcedeonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you peachpurple, what do you think about the content and its structure?

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