I'd like feedback on my article: So Quick to Anger

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  1. BrandiWoods profile image80
    BrandiWoodsposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article So Quick to Anger (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. galleryofgrace profile image79
      galleryofgraceposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      The second half of your article is out of place. I doubt that HP is going to allow you to use their pages to convert people to christian beliefs.

      1. BrandiWoods profile image80
        BrandiWoodsposted 9 months agoin reply to this

        What do you mean?

        1. DrMark1961 profile image96
          DrMark1961posted 9 months agoin reply to this

          She means that the title is deceptive, so unless you tell people in the title that the article is not about anger, but about becoming a Christian, it is not acceptable.
          If you titled it something like "Accept jesus christ to overcome your anger" or something along those lines, it might be okay. HP is not anti-Christian. They are anti-clickbait.

          1. BrandiWoods profile image80
            BrandiWoodsposted 9 months agoin reply to this

            The article isn’t about salvation it’s about how my salvation helps me deal with my anger, I offer everyone an opportunity to get saved in all of my other featured articles so I’m confused. It’s called quick to anger and I talk about my anger and how I’ve learned  to deal with mine.

            1. BrandiWoods profile image80
              BrandiWoodsposted 9 months agoin reply to this

              Oh and my article is now featured so ty all

              1. DrMark1961 profile image96
                DrMark1961posted 9 months agoin reply to this

                Good luck

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 9 months ago

    Hi. I think you'll need to delete the Amazon capsule in order for the article to be featured. Your article is about how to control anger. You haven't described why the particular version of the Bible that you're trying to sell is helpful in reaching that goal, so it doesn't seem to be directly related to the topic of your article.

    1. BrandiWoods profile image80
      BrandiWoodsposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      It is the Bible that I used to do my research I thought it would be helpful to offer it to other people but it definitely makes sense so thank you

  3. psycheskinner profile image85
    psycheskinnerposted 9 months ago

    I still think you need to mention Christianity or salvation in the title.  It's not like you can ambush someone with salvation.

  4. BrandiWoods profile image80
    BrandiWoodsposted 8 months ago

    It’s not ambushing, it’s ministering. If they are on my page, chances are they are Believers or would like to know more since it’s in The religious Christianity section, so I will give them an opportunity to become saved, but thanks for your feedback.

 
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