Hi everyone! I've edited my article like 4 times and I still can't get it featured? Can you please take a look and tell me what's wrong with it?
https://hubpages.com/travel/Family-Trip … -and-Donts
Thank you in advance!
I think they like you to start a lot of the words in titles with capital letters. Don't lose heart, keep on going. It took me a while to get my first article published.
Thank you Eurofile! It finally got aproved! Indeed the title format is very important! I keep learning!
Good morning miss marypetrou. I see you have a few of this mistakes. For example, you wrote don’t unstead of do not. You can not write in a contraction form when you are writing a hub. You also have a question in the paragraph. You need to have complete sentences. You have a few fragments sentences where you are missing the subject. The titles of each paragraph needs to be with capital letters. You need to check your puntuation. I wish you good luck with your hub. I like your article.
Thank you Erorantes! You so right about my mistakes. I definately have to try more. The truth is English is a second language to me and I hadn't written anything in English for maybe 15 years! But I read articles in English everyday. I though it would be easy to write but it is not. It so fun though! I hope that eventually I will get there! I started writing as a summer hobby but now I really enjoy it!
I think the article is thin on content. We all know about sun block, child car seats, and not leaving valuables unattended. HubPages wants unique, content-rich articles.
In addition, there are other issues. Your first paragraph says to me, you are struggling with punctuation.
"Summer is finally here and it's getting hot? (That is not a question so no question mark) Your family can't wait to get to the beach? (Also not a question) Don't overstress about it! (Exclamation points should only be used for expostulations such as Aha!) Here is a list of do's and don'ts to help you get organized and have a wonderful and carefree time with your family at the beach! (no exclamation point and in many other places throughout the article.
Also, you've lifted images from the Internet that you probably don't have permission to use, such as The Sunday Times and Shutterstock. You can only use Creative Commons licensed images.
I can't help you enough Rupert! I really overdo it with exclamation marks! Good point about the question marks too. I should enrich the article as well. Also, I though that if I wrote the source of the picture I was ok.
No, you can't just take any image and republish it. Remember that photographers are professionals and want (and need) to get paid for their work. You have to source legal-to-use Creative Commons licensed images, otherwise you might end up with a demand for payment.
This will help: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
I have used a website called TitleCase, which seems to work pretty well. You type in the text of your title and it converts it.
Just a quick tip in regards to the photos, Mary. I use websites like pixabay.com and pexels.com where you can find lots of free for commercial use pictures with no attribution required.
Pixabay is definitely my favorite, I haven't yet found a single topic I wrote about in which I couldn't find a picture to match the article. Using free pics is hassle-free.
Obviously, someone spent their free time creating those pictures so you should give him credit for that, but that's totally up to you.
Thanks for the tip John! I finally realised that just giving the source of the photo is by no means enough as a contribution! Better late than never... When I have time I am going to edit all my articles' photos. I will definately check the websites you suggested. Thanks again!
Get your sunblocks lotions. It looks great. You organized very good. You used numbers. You forgot the the subject on your sentences. You can add a subject and a period. You get your sunblocks lotions. It is one way. The other way, it is like this. Get Your Sunblocks Lotions
I like like your hub. My name is Ana miss marypetrou. It is my pleasure to guide you.
I am glad. I was able to help you. Nice to see you in hub pages. You are welcome.
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