I'd like feedback on my article: Why Are Vegans So Annoying?

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   JohnBridgesposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Why Are Vegans So Annoying?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      jansharesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Your article must be published because I was able to read it. Do you mean it got rejected for a niche site? I actually thought it was pretty good. I found it informative and humorous. However, might it be that your title implies that you're going to inform us more about the annoyances than the veganism? The article didn't really tell me what's annoying about vegans. I really like the way you broke down the different types of vegans but I found these differences more interesting and informative than annoying.
      
      Maybe the unspoken point is that they are annoying because they don't eat meat? And that they have to be accommodated at parties, restaurants, and grocery stores? My husband is vegan and it annoys me sometimes that I have to cook something different for him to eat. Maybe elaborating on or adding a list of the actual annoyances would be in more accord with you title. Or, change the title: "4 Types of Vegan Lifestyles," "How to Spot a Vegan," "Differences in Vegan Habits and Personalities." If you treat it as an informative article, you'd have to take out the first sentence in each of the opening paragraphs.
      Anyway, I'm rambling. Good luck, great article.

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      Eurofileposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Maybe a change of title might help.  I actually think it is a very good article.
      Having had a vegetarian daughter, who was a vegan for a time, a lot of what you write resonates with me.  How about your title reflecting the different types of Vegans?  All I can say is to keep on going.  You will get it featured in the end.

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      Sherry Hposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I think your article is great! I first thought you did not source the images properly, but images from other articles of yours also seem to be sourced like that. Did you include a link to those images?

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   lobobrandonposted 5 years ago

   Apart from the helpful advice Janshares provided you, I would like to add:
   
   1. You should not begin your article with a header. The title serves that purpose. Have some introduction text at the start. This could be your intro just above the image, maybe: "There are different types of Vegans and each group has some annoying qualities, but they do not all rank the same."
   2. PETA vegans has this error: They may annoying (add the missing be)

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   JohnBridgesposted 5 years ago

   Thanks all...it is now featured without my making any additional changes...smdh

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