I'd like feedback on my article: Direct Anger in Right Way

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  1. Aleksandar Vujovi profile image49
    Aleksandar Vujoviposted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Direct Anger in Right Way (must be signed in to view)

    1. Eurofile profile image95
      Eurofileposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      When I joined Hub Pages a very helpful fellow hubber suggested that I downloaded the free version of grammarly. I did and I have been very grateful for the advice as it has corrected a lot of my spelling and grammar mistakes. I think your title maybe needs a little more thought. The editors like to see evidence of a clear structure. Have you thought of numbering your points and maybe including a list or index of them? I am still learning the ropes myself. My article on the River Vltava has a whole list of changes I need to make before it can be moved onto a niche site. All I can say is that perseverance usually pays off. Keep going and you will get there in the end.

      1. Aleksandar Vujovi profile image49
        Aleksandar Vujoviposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        I am grateful for your comment, Eurofile. Your comment means a lot to me, encourage me. I will enhance and push my skills up. I notice you read my article about Belgrade. Your impression makes me jolly and gives me impulse for new articles. Best Wishes and I will with great curiosity read your articles.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 months ago

    Your article needs work.

    First, your English is not up to the standard required by HubPages; it has to be nearly perfect.

    Large blocks of type are a turn-off for readers, you need to break up paragraphs into smaller sections.

    Subheads need to be written in APA title face style. There's help for that here https://www.verywellmind.com/how-to-wri … ge-2794847

    Your images are not free of copyright restrictions. It says right in your source information "All rights reserved" that means the owner has not given you permission to use the image.

    HubPages has lots of information to help you at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

    1. Aleksandar Vujovi profile image49
      Aleksandar Vujoviposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you Rupert on very useful instructions. I saw your profile and I am amazed. Best Wishes.


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