I'd like feedback on my article: Major Environmental Hazard and Their Remedies

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   Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Major Environmental Hazard and Their Remedies (must be signed in to view)

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   To start with, your title is grammatically incorrect; it should be "Hazards."
   
   There are many other errors. For example, there is always a space after punctuation. There are random capitalizations, such as Salinity; should be salinity.
   
   You don't need to put in a sub-head reading "Photos," we can see that for ourselves. And, do you have permission to use those images? They must be public domain or creative commons licensed.
   
   Your examples are for experience in Pakistan; you should make that clear in the opening paragraph.
   
   It's a good idea to spend time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

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      Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks friend I have a question  for you  my grammar is a little  bit weak.what's type software  I can use for the corrections of my grammar?

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      Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      How can I check the license of the image, please tell me

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   theraggededgeposted 6 years ago

   Oh... he's posted it twice.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   There are a couple of free programs that help with grammar but they probably won't catch everything.
   
   Grammarly
   Hemingway

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      CYong74posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Indeed. Sometimes, they suggest wrong edits too. Best is still to strengthen your English the traditional way. Read, examine, write, learn.

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         Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks, how can I get the licence code friend

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            I have already explained to you... you have to make sure the image comes from a site which allows you to use it. It must be stated clearly. Assume that all images on which you can't ascertain the licence are copyright.
            
            So, go to Pixabay, Pexels, and Wikipedia (be careful there, as they require proper accreditation unless it is a Public Domain image). Did you read the link I gave you previously? There are lists of resources that can help you.
            
            https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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               Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Yes, I checked the pexels and other free stock photos , but one thing that I could not know yet how I can get licence code of any image like CC-BY or what type?please tell

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   CYong74posted 6 years ago

   You don't need license codes when you download the pics through sites like Unsplash, Pixabay, etc.
   
   For Wikipedia, follow the accreditation instructions listed with each image.

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      Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      But in the image capsule, there is a box where I need to write the name of the author, license type and URL of the image I know how to get the author name and URL of the image but I don't know how to get image license type

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         theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         If you use those sites, you don't need to display the code. As long as you credit the photographer, the site and the url.
         
         So it would go something like this:
         
         Source: Ben Jones via Pixabay
         URL: http:// pixabay.com/theurlofthephoto
         Caption: Whatever you want or leave blank
         
         Remember that you can only have two outgoing links to the same domain.
         
         If you were to use an image from, say, Flickr, then you do have to check the license, which appears under every photo. There is a Creative Commons search which you can filter to only show images with a commercial license (HubPages is a commercial site, so it has to be a commercial license).
         
         Wikimedia images always displays the license when you click on the appropriate link. Check each one carefully and use as directed.

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            Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks, if you like I will send you my article with my account password and user name you can check. I did the same as you tell me.

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               theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               No, don't do that.
               
               If your article doesn't get approved, it will because of other issues.

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