I'd like feedback on my article: Major Environmental Hazard and Their Remedies

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   Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Why this article  is not published  friends ?please tell me about  my article mistake
   Here is my article: Major Environmental Hazard and Their Remedies

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hello,
      
      There are several issues with your article.
      
      Grammar and punctuation needs fixing. Try the free online version of Grammarly. You can paste your text in and it will suggest corrections.
      
      The photos - photos need citation (credit in the photo capsule) and they also must have a licence that allows you to use them. You can't take photos from the internet without checking the licence.
      
      You are not writing for a Pakistani audience. HubPages is an American company and has a global readership, so references to 'the country' and 'government' are confusing.
      
      Watch out for repetition. You have repeated phrases, sentences and bullet points.
      
      Remove the reference to Allah at the end.
      
      You can access the Learning Center by clicking on Help, top right of any page. There is a lot of information there.
      
      Good luck.

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         Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much dude

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            I'm not a dude.

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               DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

               I would think he should know that just from your profile pic. It did provide me a laugh on this dreary day, however!

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         Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         I have a one question  for you friend how can I check the license  of the photos that I used in my article,and how I can use images for my article without any issue?

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            If you copied them from any site with a Copyright notice at the bottom, you cannot use them. All such work belongs to the copyright holder, and they have a right to demand payment for unauthorised use.
            
            You must make sure that they come from an image site that openly states that the photos are free to use. Try Pixabay, Pexels or Unsplash.
            
            More information here: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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               Juneed Majeeedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Thanks for your favour

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