I'd like feedback on my article: Healthy Pomegranate. 20 uses of pomegranate...

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  1. crown10 profile image46
    crown10posted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Healthy Pomegranate. 20 uses of pomegranate for the treatment of diseases (must be signed in to view)

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 weeks ago

    Aside from the poor English grammar displayed in this offering, you cannot make the outrageous claims you do for the efficacy of pomegranates without properly peer-reviewed studies to back them up.

    Offering medical advice without the necessary expertise is a very dangerous thing. Suppose someone with leukemia uses the therapy you recommend and it turns out badly for them. Are you okay with that? I'm not.

  3. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 5 weeks ago

    Normally when I read an unfeatured article that is making health claims, I advise the writer to list authoritative references. I don't think this will help in your case because of all the unsupported and problematic claims that you've made.

    Even the first sentence is a problem. You say that pomegranate causes abnormal bleeding (perhaps because you have an English problem) and that it helps unconsciousness. Someone who is unconscious should never be given anything by mouth, except by a doctor with special equipment! Many of the health problems that you list are potentially dangerous and must be checked and treated by a doctor.

    I'm sorry to be so discouraging, but you need to seriously rethink what you include in the article. This is important not only to get it featured but also for the safety of readers.

    Edit: Your English is a problem. I suspect that you're talking about leucoderma, not leukemia, when you describe a condition that involves white spots on the skin and the need to stay in the shade.

  4. Kenna McHugh profile image90
    Kenna McHughposted 5 weeks ago

    It appears you have not studied HubPages guidelines. The title for the article is incorrectly done. The listing of each point in the article is mistakenly done. You have many grammar mistakes and misspellings of medical words.
    If you want to get your articles approved, you need to study the guidelines and improve your grammar and spelling.

 
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