I'd like feedback on my article: What’s the Most Bullshit Start-up Sdvice out...

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  1. Solutionvalley profile image61
    Solutionvalleyposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: What’s the Most Bullshit Start-up Sdvice out There?

    1. Will Apse profile image89
      Will Apseposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      I would change that title, lol.

    2. Kimberly Martis profile image83
      Kimberly Martisposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      Hi! Here is some feedback. Read your article again and change the mistakes. I think this play’s a big part in it being featured or not. The message is clear and I do like the article. Hope this helps!

  2. DrMark1961 profile image97
    DrMark1961posted 4 months ago

    As Kimberly points out, there are a lot of mistakes in the English. Some of them are small (Just like a cell phone needs a charger, when the battery is about to drain out. You can just remove the comma.) but some of them are more serious. You need to go through this line by line, hopefully with a native English speaker.
    The poll is weird too. Do you agree? Agree with what?

  3. Sherry Hewins profile image96
    Sherry Hewinsposted 4 months ago

    It is obvious that English is a second language for you. The phrasing is just a bit odd. Your title still needs some work. We don't really say "Advices." It would be pieces of advice.

    You could modify your original title to say "What is the Worst Start-up Advice Out There?"
    "7 Start-up Rules You Should Not Follow" "7 Start-up Rules to Avoid" "7 Myths About Start-ups"

    I don't know if those are any good, but they are better than what you have.

  4. Solutionvalley profile image61
    Solutionvalleyposted 4 months ago

    Can u please specify the mistakes because here I am facing some problem to find those mistakes.

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 4 months agoin reply to this

      This article won't be passed with its current url. You need to start again without the word 'bullshit' and correct spelling.You can polish the text as much as you like, but with these fundamental errors, it won't be approved.

 
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