I'd like feedback on my article: He Who Know To Do Good

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  1. Wehzo profile image76
    Wehzoposted 5 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: He Who Know To Do Good

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    1. Margie Lynn profile image93
      Margie Lynnposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi -- I think you need a different title. Think about what people might be searching for on google. What words would lead them to your article?

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  2. AliciaC profile image95
    AliciaCposted 5 years ago

    Hi. I have a few suggestions. First, I think the title needs to be improved because it isn't grammatically correct. In addition, the photo should be a full-width image and should have a suitable license.

    I think the link might be a problem as well. It goes to the writer's home page instead of the article that you mention. In addition, you don't explain why you've included the link. Simply stating the title of the writer's article is not enough. A moderator may have thought that the link was promotional and unrelated to your topic.

    The article is a bit short. Writing at least 700 words (not counting quotations) is a good goal to aim for.

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  3. Wehzo profile image76
    Wehzoposted 5 years ago

    Thank you Alicia, I appreciate the feedback.  I will certainly revisit the hub and make some changes.

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  4. Kenna McHugh profile image93
    Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

    The title in the article needs to be formatted correctly. You have some words not capitalize. HP guidelines give the specifics on capitalizing your titles.

    You have unrequired space between a couple of capsules.

    I suggest you read other articles on HubPages similar to yours and see how they do as an example of formatting the article. Good luck.

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  5. Wehzo profile image76
    Wehzoposted 5 years ago

    Thank you Kenna, I appreciate the feedback and suggestions.  I am making changes to it now.

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  6. AshlyChristen profile image77
    AshlyChristenposted 5 years ago

    I agree on title

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  7. Wehzo profile image76
    Wehzoposted 5 years ago

    Thank you Ashley.  I appreciate your feedback.  I did change the title.

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