I'd like feedback on my article: Gun Violence Awareness

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  1. profile image57
    Evan Lowengrubposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Gun Violence Awareness

  2. AliciaC profile image97
    AliciaCposted 3 weeks ago

    Here are my suggestions.

    The article is too short. You should aim for at least 700 words. 1000 words is a better length. You should avoid the overuse of the term "gun violence" in the article.

    You need to add authoritative references for all of the statistics and some of the facts that you mention.

    You need to proofread the article to check for grammar and factual errors. The United States is not classified as a "low income" country, for example.

    Much of your information about how schools are responding to gun violence is widely known. You need to think of new information to add or add more details about the facts that you've already included.

    You should include the source of the photo, which should have a suitable license.

  3. Will Apse profile image90
    Will Apseposted 3 weeks ago

    It is live on hubpages now. The wonderful thing is how many people have already responded with fulsome praise in the comments section:

    Johnny Stills

    4 days ago

    Love It

    Phil Swift

    4 days ago

    Facts, gun violence is a serious thing

    Bob Frie

    4 days ago

    amazing article


    Those comments seem to have come before the article had passed QAP. One person was kind enough to include the keywords in their remark.

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      And each of of those 'people' joined on the same day as you and only left a single comment on your article.

      If you think you can game the system, know that HubPages doesn't work like that. You don't get extra rankings or earnings via comments and followers.

  4. CYong74 profile image96
    CYong74posted 3 weeks ago

    At the very least, leave 23 comments. Every one knows that's the standard for split personalities nowadays.

    1. Ladymermaid profile image89
      Ladymermaidposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Lol... I learn something new everyday wink

  5. Will Apse profile image90
    Will Apseposted 3 weeks ago

    Those names are so unconvincing. These are the ones I would have chosen:

    Chelsea Fauxlove

    Arnold Legup

    Pinky Poleclimber

    Morely Rankin

    A definite air of verisimilitude in that ensemble. The algos would swoon.

    1. greenmind profile image95
      greenmindposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Pinky Poleclimber? Awesome.

      1. Will Apse profile image90
        Will Apseposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

        She's a gogetter. But Morely is cooler.


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