I'd like feedback on my article: "Lash Me Away"

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    GinOvertonposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? The link from YouTube is my real work. Please help!? Thank you!
    Here is my article: "Lash Me Away" (must be signed in to view)

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    1. OldRoses profile image92
      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      This is a promotional blog post.  HubPages does not allow promotion of personal websites, blogs, podasts or businesses.  It is also not a blogging platform.  If you wish to write a blog, please check out Blogger or WordPress, both are free.  If you wish to write for HubPages, please spend some time reading the articles in the Help Center (Help button, upper right).  HubPages is looking for magazine-type articles, approximately 1,000 words long that answer the question "how do I ....".

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    GinOvertonposted 4 years ago

    Thank you soo much! That makes a lot of sense. I've been hearing tonsss about those two websites so I think I will check it out.

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

    I think you have completely misunderstood what HubPages is all about. It is a platform for writers to publish magazine-style articles in near-perfect English. I have no idea what your offering is supposed to be about as, given the warning, I declined to watch the video.

    Your bio says "Being a younger Child, I've always wrote." That should be "written," and what does having been a younger child have to do with writing?

    Sorry, but a lot of work needs to be done to prosper here.

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      GinOvertonposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Sir, this is my own unique approach to journalism as a whole. If you read my bio you would get that. Thank you for the advice.

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  4. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

    Hi there, as well as endorsing what others have said here, it would be a good idea to delete that comment on your article smile

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