I'd like feedback on my article: What are the point-of-sale market trends (POS).

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  1. sailakshmi profile image44
    sailakshmiposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: What are the point-of-sale market trends (POS) to be understood in bakery management? (must be signed in to view)

    1. AliciaC profile image98
      AliciaCposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      A major problem is that the article seems to be designed to promote the company described in the image. Articles that promote a business aren't allowed on HubPages. The article also seems to be disorganized and is confusing. It switches from a discussion about bakeries to one about ice cream shops and then back to bakeries again, for example. Fixing this problem won't be helpful while the article is promoting a company, however.

    2. OldRoses profile image98
      OldRosesposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      I'm sorry but this will never pass QAP as written.  It is obviously a promotion for a business which is not allowed on HubPages.  If you want to write for HubPages, you need to spend some time reviewing the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right).  The Learning Center will tell you everything you need to know to write articles acceptable to HubPages.

  2. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 12 months ago

    Their bio is an advertisement.

    1. CYong74 profile image98
      CYong74posted 12 months agoin reply to this

      What is a lead business enthusiast?

      I really miss the days when a promoter is a promoter, and a writer's a writer, and not all these corporatespeak entities.

      1. theraggededge profile image98
        theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        Heavy metal fan, of course big_smile

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image97
    FatFreddysCatposted 12 months ago

    Obvious spammer is obvious.

 
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