I'd like feedback on my article: Why so much Coronavirus?

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   UtterlySaneposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Why so much Coronavirus? (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      It appears that English is not your first language.  You would be well served to have someone who is a native speaker of English to read your article and suggest corrections.  There are too many for us to point out.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   I'm afraid there are a lot of English errors in your article. Sometimes they change the meaning of what you are trying to say. For example, the reference to a "noble" coronavirus in the first sentence makes no sense. Perhaps you meant a novel coronavirus. I assume that you mean an antidote when you say anti dot. You need to go through the article very carefully and correct all of the English errors.
   
   You should include references for the claims and facts in your article.
   
   The title of the article should be written in APA style title case.
   
   I don't understand why you've placed the article in the Linguistics section of HubPages. You should reconsider this classification.
   
   I notice that you've deleted the links to your videos, which were there in the original edition of your article. You don't need to link to them. You could add video capsules to the article and then follow the instructions for inserting a video. Saying "Watch my video" without giving further guidance isn't very helpful to the reader.
   
   Since you've just joined HubPages, it would be helpful to read the article below to discover how to use the main options when creating an article here.
   
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   UtterlySaneposted 5 years ago

   Hello Alicia,
   Thank you very much for such a detailed analysis. Sure, I will go thrrough the given article.

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   Much of what you say is incorrect, e.g. the time the virus lasts on surfaces, and you spread foolish rumors, like that China has a secret cure.
   
   I suggest that you delete this article and let people refer to their appropriate state and national public health websites.

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