I'd like feedback on my article: How to spent your free Time in better

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   aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years ago

   https://hubpages.com/education/How-to-s … -Lifestyle

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   FatFreddysCatposted 5 years ago

   You repeatedly use the phrase "How to Spent," which is incorrect. It should be How to Spend."
   
   To be honest, I was so distracted by it that I didn't read the article all the way through.

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      aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      ok i fix it.,thanks

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   I find the topic confusing.  They best way to use your time depends on your goals and these are not determined by whether people belong in the categories you used.  I think you need to break the topic up by goals, wellness, productivity etc.

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      aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      it divide people into many categories and suggest how they spent their time.

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Spend.
         
         Spent is past tense.
         
         "Writing is how I spend my time."
         
         "I spent all my time playing games last year."

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   I think you'll need to correct the English errors in the article in order for it to be accepted. Another thing that I noticed is the numbering system. It seems unnecessary to add the number 1 to a point when there is no number 2 afterwards.

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      aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      yes i fix few errors now. also numbers thanks

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         AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Yes, I can see that you've corrected some of the English errors, which is good. You need to make more corrections, though.

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            aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

            Please can you guide me about that? I mean please mention some of mistakes. It my article which i write without copying anything from anywhere. You are really awesome and i believe you can help me about it. Thanks

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               OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               It is your job to write correct English.  It is not our job to teach you how to write English.  HubPages is an American site and will only publish articles written in perfect English.  You need to work on your English language skills if you want to write on this platform.

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                  aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

                  Thanks for great feedback. Ok i will see what will happen with my article. Just waiting for accepted or rejected by Quality team.

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               theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               Never ever copy anything.

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   aa2mm22ii22rr2posted 5 years ago

   I write original and most of grammar error are fixed already. Thanks everyone for helping me improve my article. I have over 50 ideas in my list to write more but i am still waiting for quality team to decide about 1st article.

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